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The Most Insane Magical Girl Cross Over Ever

Mitakihara City. The city of the future. The schools has equipment other districts would have murdered in the night with a rusty razor for. With an obscene excess of public funds they had replicated some of the worlds most legendary landmarks (such as the Eiffel Tower).  It also had a really great harbor district and thus a goal for people trying to flee the magenta flood of tireless naked slime people determined to add everyone to their numbers.

Madoka stood at the edge of town, looking at the major highway and unirail leading in. No cars or trains were moving now.  There was however the masses of pink slime thing headed straight for her and her home, her family, classmates, and people she passed on the way to school each morning.

Madoka, Puella Magi, Magical Girl, pulled back on her wood and rose themed bow and fired a glowing pink arrow into the sky. A moment later a pattern appeared overhead like the Sephirot, and dozens, over a hundred glowing pink arrows rained down on the slimy invaders.  

They were torn through like swiss cheese and fell apart, but in under a minute they'd have pulled themselves back together and continued their advance.

"They're not Witches or Familiars." Madoka said almost to herself.

She expected Kyubey to appear out of thin air and give his own polite but emotionless observation and drop one or two actual facts among his evasive answers.  But there was nothing.

Kyubey was likely in Mitakihara City right now, finding every terrified for her life tween-age girl he could find and offering them one wish in exchange for becoming a Puella Magi. The majority of those wishes right now of course would be for escape, safety, or for the monsters to go away.  Of course Kyubey wouldn't mention of course that once they let their darker emotions devour them that they'd turn into nightmarish abominations from hades that had to be put down by -more- Puella Magi. That tended to reduce the number of Contractees.

'He doesn't understand, he really doesn't.' Madoka would have loved to think of Kyubey as evil, but he wasn't. But he wasn't in the least bit good either. He simply didn't get the human concept of loss and why the death of a single person was something to mourn.

"I think they're called 'Youma.'"  Said a girl next to her in a bright yellow and brown dress with a German style to it. "I think the Sailor Senshi are supposed to take care of them."

Madoka and Mami were both distance fighters, so it made sense for the two of them to make up the second line while Sayaka and Homura made up the front line. As for Kyoko, working well with others had never been her strong suit, she was acting as skunkworks, it was nicer than calling her a loose cannon.

"Those are human beings." Madoka said simply.

"Not anymore. No more than the witches." Mami said simply as she picked off a few with her flintlocks like a sniper before switching to heavy artillery and greatly increasing the time it took for them to reform.

'Or us.' Madoka almost said. She remembered Homura telling her of the timeline where Mami's response to finding out the origin of the witches had been to tearfully kill her teammates. In this timeline Madoka was living she had taken it much better.

Homura refused to say how many times she had gone back in time to try and stop Madoka from making a contract and sealing her fate to die or become the witch Kriemhild Gretchen.

In this timeline that Madoka was living, Homura had chosen to tell her -very early- the truth of the witches but no one else.  In this timeline that Madoka was living, after Sayaka had made her own 'early' contract to save Mami from the witch Charlotte, Madoka had made her own contract with Kyubey, knowing precisely the price.  'I wish Puella Magi didn't have to become witches and I could help them.' That was the wish Madoka had made in this timeline in which she was living.

Kyubey of course had been 'terrified' of that wish, but due to there being a very large lack of safety measures regarding what contractees could wish for regarding the system, he had no choice but to comply.  Of course, Madoka had said 'didn't have to' not 'would not.'

"Foul monsters! As a hero of justice I shall not let you pass!" Sayaka summoned a field of blades into existence slashing with the speed of a cheetah and the grace of a ballerina dancer, dismembering and beheading the Jellax as they recklessly continued their approach with no fear for their lives as Sayaka's blade attacks were merely an inconvenience for them.

In the space between ticks of the clock, the napalm bombs appeared among the reforming Jellax, who screamed in alarm, pain, and horror as the fire devoured them. This caused the horde to pause as they had no idea where these bombs were appearing from apparently by magic in the wake of the knightly teenage girl who they couldn't get close enough to touch.

Homura regarded her work with icy precision. Freezing time, laying her bomb she had liberated (stolen) from a military weapon's stockpile and letting time move foreword again. It was keeping Sayaka alive, and that was good for Madoka, so Homura did so to the best of her ability.

Homura wondered which version of herself she was anymore, having traveled back two months endlessly, she had lost track herself, each time creating a new timeline from nothing. She wondered if another Homura had succeeded already where she had failed, or Madoka had made a wish even more overwhelming than the one she had in this timeline. It wouldn't surprise her.

Sayaka continued to spout her brave one-liners and continued to turn Jellax into jello cubes but at the same time wondering at the base of her mind. 'Where are the senshi?'

In this timeline where Sayaka lived, she remembered meeting the Senshi of Jupiter. The youma that had wandered too far from Juuban, Sayaka cutting it to shreds like a maniac. Jupiter wondering about her. Sayaka calmly explaining she wasn't human, she was just a Soul Gem controlling an empty human body that used to be hers, she was just a zombie.

And Jupiter slapped her. Caught off guard, Sayaka hadn't turned off her sense of pain. Jupiter had asked if she felt that, if she really thought she wasn't feeling sad, if she really thought she wasn't feeling angry.

"Zombies don't have hearts. They don't feel bad or good! Now stop this nonsense about being a zombie!"  In this timeline Jupiter had said.

Homura had told Sayaka that in every timeline she had been to Sayaka had died, weather she made a contract or not, weather her Soul Gem became a Grief Seed or not, death awaited her.

And Sayaka wondered if her death, had been exchanged for that of the person who saved her.

+Warning. Soul Gem Corruption at 51%+

~Sayaka.~ Homura said in her mind, even if Kyubey wasn't present they could still use his telepathy as a relay, ~Withdraw, have Madoka purify your Soul Gem.~

~No! I can still fight! I can still hold on for a while longer!~

~You're such an idiot.~

~Yes!~ Sayaka mentally snarled as she summoned a sword that would make Cloud Strife green with envy and swatted at the Jellax like they were flies.

~Your choice.~  Homura saw. This flood of living slime was without end. They were only delaying it, no matter how many Homura incinerated, they were more ready to take their place.  But she didn't have a choice. Madoka wanted to give the human beings as much time as possible to flee for their individuality.  So Homura stayed as well.

Kyōko meanwhile, on almost the other side of town, dodged a lightning bolt followed up by a fireball.

"I heard you Puella Magi were dangerous." Slimey said. "But I didn't think you were crazy!"

"Depends on yer point ta view!" Kyoko snarled extending her spear so it went straight through the fire throwing Jellax. Of course it did no actual damage. She violently tore the spear upwards, it split the Jellax in two. Of course she'd reform in seconds.

Unlike the main horde, the 'guardian jellax' had decided to take an indirect approach to reaching Mitakihara City while the main horde simply got the attention of the city's super natural defenders.

Apparently they hadn't heard that working as a united whole had -never- been the Puella Magis' defining trait!

"You're not magical girls!" The fire spewing one declared, "You're just thugs who smash whatever happens to be in your way not caring who gets hurt in the process!"

"I have a friend who you'd get along very well with."

The lightning throwing one said, "We'll all get along very well once we are all part of the Jellax."

"Sorry! No! Not happening! I made a promise to myself a while ago that I wouldn't lose what humanity I still have! So take your offer to shove it!" Kyoko said with passion that mirrored her over the top red hair and dress.

"Sorry, that's not an option. All must become part of our family."

" . . .  Sorry. Ya know. If we had met a bit earlier, there might have been a part of me that WANTED to be part of your family, even at your sick price but . . ." In this timeline Kyoko was living, faces passed through her mind: bug up her rear Homura, blind idealist Sayaka, annoying 'Can't we all get along?' Madoka, always smiling Mami never showing how terrified she was.  "Right here? Right now? I have a family." 'Please don't let Sayaka ever find out I said that!'

That was when Kyoko turned her spear into a link chain. The Jellax Guardians weren't worried, she was good at dodging, but her physical attacks had all proven moot.  Then the chain kept extending, and rolled up like cheap christmas lights into a ball . . . came down with all the force and impact of a boulder!  Their pieces scattered everywhere.

Kyoko breathed in and out at the exertion.  

+Warning. Soul Gem Corruption At 40%+

"Ah shut it."

Madoka looked at the creature before her shaped like a young long haired woman and a red bow with a yellow bow-tie. With her arms and legs currently blasted off but reforming. "I want you tell your mistress something. A version of me has been exactly where she is. And it isn't going to work. Creating a place where everyone is happy by force is a fake happiness, it's artificial, your ideal world will be nothing but a lie."

"You can tell her yourself. And you can apologize for having such a narrow, pig-headed, ignorant view of our family." Muck said simply having gotten past the cannon fire and hail of arrows while her fellow Jellax had been pinned down.

"Another me knows what it was like to rule a world where everyone was happy, where no one was sad, where no negative feelings of any kind were allowed. In my dreams I see Kriemhild Gretchen's ideal world. . . . Your family will be a shallow, listless, aimless nothing, everyone will be happy, but no one will be remotely defined as alive."

"You're not making any sense!"

"I'm sorry."

Muck shoot out a spear of her own body to make direct contact with Madoka's body. However between ticks of the clock Madoka vanished as Homura grabbed her pink clade comrade and pulled her out of harm's way.  These Jellax had no idea that a Puella Magi's body was just an empty shell remotely animated by girl's Soul Gem, but no need to test what would happen.

Mami blew Muck to pieces, of course Muck began to pull herself back together almost at once.

"We've done all we can Madoka. We can't buy them anymore time. It's time we left." Homura said simply as they horde had inched closer and closer and Homura had almost run of napalm (she had actually had to twice already freeze time and go and steal more from the abandoned stockpiles).

Madoka looked at the coast, and saw the ships, they hadn't all vanished over the horizon.

"No. Not yet. Just a little bit more."

" . . .  As you wish." Homura vanished and reappeared reeking behind the horde's front line.

"We're not going to win this are we?" Sayaka asked her.

+Danger. Soul Gem Corruption At 75% +

"Depends on how you define 'win' our objective to simply buy as much time as possible for the civilians to escape."

"I see." Sayaka said perhaps finally seeing how the horde wasn't really getting smaller even though some of their numbers were now dead piles of ashes.

It had been Homura and Kyoko's idea to herd the witches and the familiars into the Jellax horde first. It had worked as long as the witches and their familiars had lasted, at first the Jellax horde was stopped in it's tracks. Then the Guardian Jellax had shown up . . . and one by one the witches and their familiars had fallen. Then the guardians had scattered, where to, they hadn't been able to quite figure out yet.

~Hey guys. Can ya hear me?~  Came Kyoko's voice over telepathy. ~Just want ya all to know, I don't . . . I don't regret meeting you guys.~

Kyoko was sucking wind she held her spear in a defensive pose, each breath a resistance to lay down. 'New and upgraded body my butt.'

Kyoko now faced, three, six, eight Jellax Guardian!

"We are the Star Light Slime!" Said three of the new comes together. "It's time for you to join our family and experience the love of the Jellax!"

"Sorry, I, I think the adoption paperwork didn't go through." Kyoko managed to quip. After another of the new comers had thrown an EARTHQUAKE her way followed by another of the new comes encasing her legs in ice, the last new comers had grabbed her arms and legs and kissed her. And nothing. The Jellax had looked positively confused and bewildered!  Then the Jellax had been torn off by a flail of chained spear heads.

'I should almost thank that bastard stuffed animal for relocating my soul.' Kyoko thought.

"You are out numbered, out gunned, out flanked, and your resources are low." Said the ice throwing one, "Please just surrender, lower the barrier behind you and let us pass."

The Guardians had already tried to just simply through the openings in the fence Kyoko had created, it had grown spikes and spat them out.

"Eight, or a hundred." Kyoko breathed, "You're not getting through."

+Warning. Soul Gem Corruption at 60% And Rising +

'I told you to shut up!' Kyoko mentally spat.

~Kyoko what's wrong?~ Sayaka dared call out.

~Nothing much. Just got some super special party guests . . . don't think I'll be able to be a good host much longer though, don't worry, I'll be sure to end the party with a bang. A big one.~

Sayaka felt the horror rise up inside her.

+Danger! Soul Gem Corruption at 85% And Rising!+

"We need to get those Guardians off Kyoko NOW . . . " Sayaka said simply.

"I can't leave you." Homura said simply, "You need to retreat and withdraw three minutes ago!"

"So Madoka wants more time. And you can't leave to help Kyoko as long as I'm here. And we don't have time to think up a good plan yes?"

"Yes." Homura said. She had exactly one handful of napalm left, she was reduced to using traditional grenades and pipe bombs, which were only delaying the enemy rather than damaging them even more so.

"Then we need a witch to draw those Guardians away from Kyoko now don't we?"

+DANGER! Soul Gem Corruption at 90% And Rising.+

" . . . I'm sorry Sayaka." Homura said her voice like an Arctic wind, "It seems we've hung out too much. I've rubbed off on you. I apologize."

"Just save Kyoko please. You said I've always died no matter how times you go back in time right? Who am I to argue with fate?"

Homura actually started, she activated her shield's barrier as a child Jellax tried to give her a great big hug that got too close to her Soul Gem, "I promise Sayaka. This time we'll save you. Remember no matter how far you fall into the darkness. We'll come back for you."

"Thank you." She said a blackness gathering in her eyes.

+HAZARD! Soul Gem Corruption At 95% And Rising! Failsafe Engaged! Automatically Reverting to Base Form!+


+HAZARD! Grief Seed Conversion Imminent! Fail-Safe Reverting To Base Form!+

"Pass-Command: Le Morte d'Arthur! Override!"

+ . . . Confirmed. Failsafe disabled. Corruption At 97%.+

Homura vanished.

+Corruption 98%+

"Madoka I'm sorry. You're going to have to leave without me."

+Corruption 100%+

And her Soul Gem shattered, and the remains twisted itself into something black and ugly. The connection lost, Sayaka's body resumed it's mundane attired and fell onto the highway like the stringless puppet it was.

The Jellax actually screamed in confusion and alarmed as something like a armored mermaid wielding sword and baton materialized around the Grief Seed, looking like something made of different pieces of two dimensional cloth in a three dimensional world. It roared mindlessly as it's puppet familiars materialized into existence around it. Sayaka's body lay empty and forgotten even as the Jellax tried to assimilate it only to find it didn't have a pulse. The witch whose name was Oktavia von Seckendorff cared nothing for it, only to do away with these creatures that dared interrupt it's symphony.

Receiving a blaring, scared, confused, and confused screams from a walkie talkie, Jelly told the Guardians they had to retreat at once.

"What makes you think you're going anywhere." Kyoko said taking out her hair braid, letting her hair fall loose. "We haven't had the fireworks yet. She tossed the hair pin foreword and threw her spear directly at it.

Time stopped, she felt someone grab her form behind and whisper in a harsh voice, "You don't get to die today!" And was pulled away before she could be engulfed in the explosion.

"SAYAKA!!!" Madoka screamed in absolute horror seeing the THING rise among the Jellax straight out of one her nightmares. "Why? WHY?" Her wish enabled her to heal the soul gems of others, Sayaka didn't need to be this!

Homura appeared with Kyoko next to her.

"Sayaka? . . . you . . ." Kyoko said seeing the nightmare mermaid, "you, you, you, dumb-dumb-dumb, how could, but-"

"She did it so I would no longer be watching her back and could save you while still delaying them." Homura said simply, but the edge in her tone was very audible.

"Stupid girl." Kyoko said her lip quivering, "How many times do I need to tell her that you should only think about yourself? That way, that way--." Kyoko bit her lip.

The Guardians were now racing to the scene to deal with the new witch that had appeared out of nowhere.

Homura put her hands on Madoka's pink clade shoulders, "Madoka, we ran out of time a while ago. We've been on borrowed time for too long as is. If we don't leave now we won't ever and I CAN promise you that your family will suffer for that."

"Don't mind me!" Mami shouted cheerfully, "Just keep having your heart to heart as I keep blasting the flood at point blank range!"

A this point, it was like trying to hold back a tidal wave with a wall of fire-hoses as Mami fired Tiro Finale as if her technique was going out season.

Homura used the last of her napalm, nearly exhausted the limits her time stop, dodged a beheading from Oktavia von Seckendorff's tree sized sword, and brought back a lifeless husk.

" . . . thank you." Kyoko said before Madoka could.

"If Madoka's to heal Sayaka later, she'll need a body to live in. And I don't trust Kyubey to provide her with a new one."

Madoka stiffly nodded, sniffing away tears.  "Let's go!"

"Right behind you guys!" Mami happily declared reduced using her cannons as melee weapons as she used her flintlocks to blast the hands off of Muck who had got herself back together and was being way too friendly.

"Everyone hold onto me." Homura ordered and in the next second they were gone.  The Guardians appeared on the scene a while later, combining all their efforts on Oktavia von Seckendorff.

The witch proved dangerous and formable, it delayed their efforts to move onto the city itself for not a short time. As it finally collasped and fell apart before their eyes and it's familiars were finished off quickly, the Jellax were confused by the black ordainment that fell from it's vanished body. It proved indestructible. Much like the others they had found. They touched it, and were confused when it reacted as if they were touching a human's body. The Grief Seed dug into Muck's hand and into her body but did no harm.

When the Guardians returned to the great pool that had been set up in the front court yard of the Imperial Palace in front of their queen's throne on Earth, they were even more confused at the shapes that rose out of the slime pool and took the shape of young tween age girls with the black ordainments at their centers.

"Who are you? What are you names?" Queen Jamanen asked not able to read their thoughts while they had been forming.  They bowed to their queen and spoke in turn.

"Jellax Izabel."

"Jellax Roberta."

"Jellax Patricia."

"Jellax Charlotte."

"Jellax . . .. Jellax Oktavia von . . .  von Seckendorff."

~Fin Of The Most Insane Magical Girl Cross Over Ever
Okay ladies and gentlemen. This is the most positively insane Magical Girl/Magical Girl cross over in history!

Between Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger's [link] Jellax verse, [link] and an incarnation of the single most twisted and wrapped magical girl anime of all time. Puella Magi Madoka Magica. [link]

Behind the Scenes: One element in this story I wanted to include but couldn't figure out how was the idea of Homura being completely engulfed by the Jellax and throwing her Soul Gem to Madoka leaving her body to the Jellax but herself with Madoka. Then, using Sayaka's empty shell as a new vessel since her current body was unavailable. She would have been able to speak to Madoka while still in soul gem form since she'd have bonded herself to Madoka's hand until she could get a new empty shell animate.

And if you're wondering about Charlotte, remember that a familiar can turn into a clone of the witch that spawned them if allowed to fester.

I left it ambiguous on purpose whether or not the Puella Magi would join the resistance or be their own resistance cell, or chose to protect their families and leave on one of the boats headed across the ocean.

The Jellax Family Group. [link]

BTW: Check out the sequel I was commissioned to write.

[link] [link]
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Neo-Byzantium Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014
The battle of Mitakihara City was truly tragic. The Puell Magi fought us because they were afraid that we'd turn out to be just like Kyubey and the Incubators. If anyone's to blame for this pointless battle, it's the Incubators for turning the Puella Magi into xenophobic fanatics. It looks to me like Madoka and Mami are quite nice and caring, I'd love to have them join our family. Sayaka from what I've seen through memories of those who we converted seemed like a nice girl, she was just misguided which I don't fault her for. Homura is a mystery while Kyoko seems like a rabid dog, she must have had it pretty rough to be like that, I hope we can save them at some point. As for the Jellax witches, it seems like we've gained some powerful family members.....

OOC: /sighs/ Oh Sayaka, why'd you have to go and play the hero and become a Witch? At least she helped to save the lives of large numbers of innocent civilians. 
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014
Neo-Byzantium Featured By Owner Edited Jul 1, 2014
Yes, I did actually and I enjoyed reading it. It's fitting that the Puella Magi help in the fight against the Jellax and it continues to cross over with Sailor Moon. 
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014
Comments appreciated.
Neo-Byzantium Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014
"OOC: /sighs/ Oh Sayaka, why'd you have to go and play the hero and become a Witch? At least she helped to save the lives of large numbers of innocent civilians. "

She faced her destiny like an adult. 


Mami, "I trust KYUBEY more than I trust you." 

Neo-Byzantium Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014
OOC: Yeah, Sayaka did just that. No matter what faults she may have, Sayaka is above all things noble and courageous and willing to sacrifice herself for her friends and loved ones. She is indeed a brave heroine........

/hurt by Mami's remark but understands it/ I'm sorry you feel that way Mami, I really am. I just hope you change your mind in due time and no matter how long it takes, you and the other Puella Magi shall be free from Kyubey's grasp......
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014
Mami, "We already have a savior." 
Neo-Byzantium Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014
Really? Who is it? /curious/
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014
(Madoka of course, but I wonde if she'd say that) 
Neo-Byzantium Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014
Probably not. She wouldn't want them to gun for Madoka anymore then they already are.
KarrinBlue Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
"'He doesn't understand, he really doesn't.' Madoka would have loved to think of Kyubey as evil, but he wasn't. But he wasn't in the least bit good either. He simply didn't get the human concept of loss and why the death of a single person was something to mourn. "
THANK YOU. It is so hard to find fic that actually understands how Kyubey's mindset works.

"Of course, Madoka had said 'didn't have to' not 'would not.' "
So, magical girls have to WANT to become witches? Since wishes are always granted how you intended them to be, the wording shouldn't matter, right? Unless Madoka wanted them to be able to choose...

Oh well. Good story!
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
"THANK YOU. It is so hard to find fic that actually understands how Kyubey's mindset works."

If Kyubey DID have emotions, he'd be a heartless monster. Except he REALLY IS heartless, he doesn't GRASP concepts like empathy, regret, or compassion. They're just part of the system to churn out hope and despair. He doesn't, no, he CAN'T appreciate them unto themselves. While this can be argued about sociopaths (and doesn't excuse their actions) to call Kyubey evil is just the easy way out.

"Of course, Madoka had said 'didn't have to' not 'would not.' "
So, magical girls have to WANT to become witches? Since wishes are always granted how you intended them to be, the wording shouldn't matter, right? Unless Madoka wanted them to be able to choose..."

It's explored more in the sequel fic how Madoka's wish works.

"Oh well. Good story!"

THANKS! Wait till you read the rest. (It's here in my gallery already.)
Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012
Now that I have Puella Magi Madoka Magica on dvd, I can appreciate this crossover all the more :D
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012
How so?
Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012
You mean aside from the simple fact of understanding more of it?
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012
Yes. You said you didn't get this stories at first remember?
Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012
Indeed. But now that I have seen the series, I fully get it, and I can applaud your writing of the Puella Magi girls :clap: :hug:

Side note, who do you think would win in a full on fight between Homura and Sailor Pluto?
Though I like Pluto more, I think Homura would win, and I'm pretty sure you know why ;)
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013
Homura is a total combat pragmatic. And Pluto is FORBIDDEN from using her time magic and is taken out of the battle as punishment (likely by Hades) for using it.
Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013
FenrisBlackwell Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2012
I have no idea what the hell I just read. BUT I WANT MORE! @_@
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2012
A crossover with the Sailor Moon fanon verse Jellax Ascent, and a ever so slightly alt Madoka Magica world line.
TanithLipsky Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011
this is good.
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011
Thanks! :-)
Neko-Noskire Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2011
puella magi ftw!
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2011
Just read the sequel then! ;-)
Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger Featured By Owner May 21, 2011
Ok, I am just a teensy bit lost for words :blush:
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner May 21, 2011
Okay. How about, "Okay, let me just upload this here to the group page."


And I did say it was the most crazy magical girl cross over ever.
Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger Featured By Owner May 21, 2011
Like so ;)
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner May 21, 2011
Yes. Like so.
tasakeru828 Featured By Owner May 21, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Very nicely done! I was wondering when the Jellax fans would find out about this series... I like the result. :D
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner May 21, 2011
You're welcome!

What was nicely done about it? What was it about the result you liked?

You were actually wondering who'd do a crossover like this first?
tasakeru828 Featured By Owner May 21, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Well, I'd seen Sailor Moon/Madoka crossovers before, of course, but none specifically with the Youma.

I liked the effort you put into the descriptions, especially of Octavia... and the characterization was pretty spot on too. I admit I didn't see the Jellax Witches coming, not at all... I'd kinda like to see a sequel now where we see what they can do!

I also think it would be interesting to see Kyubey's reaction to this. I wonder how he'd handle it? Obviously like the little bastard he is, of course, but I mean specifically.
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner May 21, 2011
"Well, I'd seen Sailor Moon/Madoka crossovers before,"

Any that use Moon Healing to cure the grief seed/corrupt soul gem problem? Restoring the sevens shadows to people in comparison wouldn't be that much different for Serena to heal the witches.

I'm just glade you weren't upset how I used the 'alternate timeline/alternate wish' idea.

" but none specifically with the Youma."

Technically they're called 'droids' since Jamanen served the Nega Moon Family, Mami was just using the term the general public has come to use for the monsters the Senshi fight.

'I liked the effort you put into the descriptions,'

I didn't really put that much.

'especially of Octavia... '

Verbally describing a witch is intentionally hard. Thank you.

"and the characterization was pretty spot on too."

Oooooh? What would you say was in character and was not in character just for comparison? :)

" I admit I didn't see the Jellax Witches coming, not at all... "

That was kinda a spur of the moment thing, if you read the description there actually a few ideas I couldn't figure out how to insert into the final story.

" I'd kinda like to see a sequel now where we see what they can do!"

I actually fully intended this to be a one-shot story at beast. Their grief seeds would likely be visible in a hole in their chests or elsewhere on their bodies. Also the Jellax collective in a way I figured dissipated their grief (making them much more sane and productive and non-agressive), but they didn't become soul gems because they weren't cured of it. As for what abilities they'd have, that's a good question.

I doubt this would EVER be accepted as 'canon' (nothing I write for a massive group story universe rarely is), but the base idea I have is that'd eventually be part of Wicked Lady's slaves/minion.

ANOTHER VERY IMPORTANT THING I FORGOT TO PUT IN THE STORY I JUST REMEMBERED! I wanted to have Homura sense that the Jellax were 'out of time' and 'like her' since Jamanen was from the future, but she's altering her own past and the reason she was meant to go to the past to begin with, which can seriously damage time.

"I also think it would be interesting to see Kyubey's reaction to this. I wonder how he'd handle it? Obviously like the little bastard he is, of course, but I mean specifically."

Well as said in story, he's contracting every desperate girl he can come across who just wants to escape or wants protection from the Jellax. He has his doubts the Jellax can be stopped likely, so he's possibly bleeding as much blood from the stone as possible before he has to move on. Of course, Madoka's wish REALLY screwed things over since for the Puella magi in this timeline becoming a witch is now a DANGER rather than INEVITABILITY and Madoka herself can now purify soul gems without the help of an Incubator.

This makes Kyubey's job of harvesting emotions that much harder. He might consider the Jellax as a new emotional energy source if he can possible figure out a way to exploit it.
tasakeru828 Featured By Owner May 22, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
The thought of Sailor Moon healing Witches had crossed my mind, but I don't know that I've seen it elsewhere.

Far from being upset, I'm intrigued by stories where Madoka's wish was different at the end. I never have a problem with diverging from canon so long as there's a sensible reason for doing so.

I was using "Youma" as a catch-all term... I've gotten in the habit of doing so and forgot that the Jellax/Jamanen were classified as Droids. Your pardon.

I especially liked your characterization of Kyoko... she came across every bit as brash and fiery as she does in the anime. But really, you did a great job with pretty much everyone's defining traits: Sayaka's impulsiveness and black-and-white morality, Mami's calm and dignity, Homura's numbness and badassery, and Madoka's purity of spirit. You got all of the essentials in there.

The idea of Homura being able to sense the Jellax being from a different time is intriguing... makes me wish again that there were more to this.

And yeah, I can see Kyubey acting that way, particularly in such an extreme situation.
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2011
I think I should tell you that I'm accepting commissions for writing stories.

And I have strange image of throwing Yuma Chitose into the mix. (Which shocks Homura seeing her after so many timelines).

Along with the black incubator eating the droid gems of fallen Jellax saying they taste like sugar cherry grief seeds.
tasakeru828 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Color me extremely freakin' interested! :D
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2011
You have paypal?
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alexwarlorn Featured By Owner May 22, 2011
"The idea of Homura being able to sense the Jellax being from a different time is intriguing... makes me wish again that there were more to this."

I wouldn't know where to take the story. And extending one-shots have a habit of resulting in incomplete stories because no set goal was in mind.

So while I'm very VERY VERY happy that the story left you wanting more! (What any author wants to hear!) I sadly wouldn't know what path to take the story down without it ending up in limbo.
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