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Pony POV Series Side Story: Starlight
Pony POV Series Gaiden Seven Dreams/Seven Nightmares
Part 2 of 2
Written By: Kendell2 and Acalanthide
Made with permission from Alexwarlorn

After The Disaster:

What happened? There was a big what was happening?

Everything...everything's gone...all that's left is a huge crater...

I...I never wanted this to happen...I see ponies wondering all over...they seem lost...I...I see double in some cases, some lying on the ground...but they're standing next to themselves...I hear ponies crying...ponies can this be happening? can't be! What's going on?!

"Now that's just messed up."

I turn and see a...a chimera...thing floating in the air, he looks so confused...He vanished before I could say anything. Was...was it his fault? Or was it mine? Who...who did this?! This can't be happening?! I...I can't be responsible for this, can I?! No...but...then who is?

"Starlight..." spoke a haunting voice behind me, like a wind through a graveyard.

I turn and find myself looking into the eyes of a white and black furred pony. He's...he's huge, and he has horns and wings...his huge wings are skeletal, bone...he had a horse skull for a cutie mark and held a scythe in a magical aura. I saw another pony standing nearby like him, he had a noose hanging around his neck. His cutie mark was a tree shaped like a pony posed like the number four, huh? And he reminded me of one of those tarot cards...the hanged stallion I think.

"W-who are you?" I ask.

"I am Mortis Thanatos Charon, the 13th. The Concept of Death..."

Death? Death?! I took a trot back. "No...I...I can't be dead...I can't be!" I looked around, all the other ponies, no, it couldn't be.

"You are, and that is why I'm here."

The hanged stallion looked to him. "Mortis, I'll leave this to you, I'm here for somepony else."

Mortis nodded slowly. "Understood, Pensilis."

Pensilis slowly walked off see Misty standing next to her own body...I...I can barely recognize it as her anymore...I hear crying...her daughter...her body was curled over her daughter? But...if I can see this then... But! They were in Ponvyille! How am I seeing this?!

I slowly looked up to Mortis. "I...I really am dead..."

Mortis merely nodded.

I didn't see my was probably not there to see...I...I suddenly felt...numb...

"So...where do I go now?" I...I didn't know what else I should say...what could I say? I...Misty...who knows how many others...dead...

"I am not the one who decides that. I am merely the ferrystallion who guides souls to their resting place. Another will serve as your judge."

Mortis touched his horn to me and everything went white.

Everything faded back into view, like a television turning on. "Where am I?" I asked slowly, looking around. I was in a raised chair, looking down across a courtroom. "What's going on?"

"You're on trial."

Looking down...I think where the bailiff stands... I didn't know the exact word I was looking for. Legal proceedings were not my area of expertise. All I knew about them came from courtroom dramas on TV and our in-school trial on Teddy when I was a teenager. And they weren't even my favorite genre. Standing at the-bailiff's-spot was another of those winged unicorns, like Mortis. Only this one was golden in color, and had a beard. His Cutie Mark was a pair of balance scales. But the strangest part were his heterochromic eyes, one eye was red and the other blue.

"W-who are you?"

"I am Judicium, the 20th, Concept of Balance, Judgment, and Fair Say," he explained, his voice...not emotionless, in fact it was kind of comforting...empathetic, but it also felt completely impartial.

"Judgment?...So I'm to be judged, then?" I asked, dread crawling up my spine.

"No, Starlight. You are the judge."

If I wasn't already dead, my heart would've skipped a beat. "I'm judging myself? How does that work?"

"In this court, you are both the defendant and the judge. You shall hear the evidence against you. Your decision will decide the fate of your soul."

I decide the fate of my soul? That can't be right...that feels too easy...I'm missing something here.

"I am merely here to advise you on the workings of my court. I understand your experience as a judge is limited, Professor Starlight."

"O-ok... Mr. Judicium, sir... so I just call the prosecution and defense to make their... what's it called... opening statements, right?"

"That is correct."

"A-alright...Defense, please give your opening argument..." I said, laying eyes on the defense attorney, was another winged unicorn...she...

She was the same size and shape of the other winged unicorns I had seen... I...she was beautiful...I felt a swelling of pride just looking at her... My cutie mark had never shined so brightly, it was like the sparkles of a magician's magic. Wait, wasn't The Magician another Tarot?

"Thank you, Your Honor," said Defense Attorney Me, clearing her throat and rising from the table. "Your Honor, I will prove that my client, Starlight, is innocent of the crimes of which she is accused! The circumstances will show that the horrible catastrophe is not her fault! I shall not rest until that fact is made clear! I will call every witness, present every piece of evidence, until her innocence is proven to this court!" she announced in an over-the-top fashion...

Defense Attorney Me felt more like an actress who'd been cast as a lawyer than than the real deal. Someone with good vocal coaching, at least. If she was me, did she know how this was going to end?

"Ok...Prosecution?" I was honestly afraid, more afraid than I'd ever been. That...that explosion... all those dead ponies... was their blood on my hooves?

A...A colt stood up from his desk. A colt is the prosecutor? He looked about seven or eight years old.

"I will prove to the court that Starlight's actions were instrumental in contributing to the recent catastrophe, and that she should take responsibility for her own actions," he proclaimed, then sat down.

Take responsibility? I...I don't want to go to the bad place...b-but...what if I really was responsible? If all those ponies are dead and it's all my fault?

I shook my head to clear it, then looked to the other m-I mean the defense attorney. Yes. The defense attorney. Just a lookalike. Not me. "Defense, call your first witness."

The defense lawyer stood up and cleared her throat. "I call the defendant to the stands!" she announced, once more in that over-the-top fashion.

Suddenly it was like I was in two places at once. Now I was also seeing this courtroom from the witness chair AND the judge's bench-thing! I could see myself! What...what's going on?!

"Starlight, this is the spirit world," Judicium explained. "Physics of the mortal world do not apply here."

This is normal?! ...Relax Starlight, take a deep breath...oh, right...j-just settle down.

"Do you swear to tell the truth, the whole truth, and nothing but the truth?" asked Judicium, having me...the me in the witness chair raise, my hoof.


The prosecutor turned to me. "Starlight, you were the head of a grand-scale effort to alter the world through magical means. What was the point of this?"

"T-the point was to try and grant everypony's make the world a better place...a utopia for everypony."

"Was it your idea? Remember, you're under oath."

"...N-no...Bright Eyes came up with the idea, but I was the one that proposed it to the government and handled all our negotiations and insured it actually happened..."

The defense smiled. "Let the record show that Starlight is correct, and she was not the one who came up with the idea. Now, Starlight, were you careful about the project?"

"Y-yes...yes, I was...Bright Eyes and the other scientists checked everything, I double checked everything...I...I have no idea how it went so wrong..."

"...No further questions."

The prosecutor stood up and approached the witness stand...even though he was just a colt, he had this...weight to him...I just can't explain it...

"Starlight, did you know there were risks involved with the project?"

"Y-yes...But it seemed worth the risk...I never thought it might blow up like that..."

The colt looked up at me. "No further questions."

That was it? One question?

I was in one place again: the judge's bench. Thank goodness. Staring out of two different pairs of eyes had been WEIRD.

"...Would the prosecution like to call a witness at this time?"

"Not at this time," the colt replied.


"The defense would like to call to the stand: Film Critique."

A flash of light occurred, and suddenly, the fattest Pegasus I'd ever seen was sitting in the witness stand.

"Forgive me, but is this someone I know?"

"Starlight, as I've already said, the spirit world operates under different rules than the mortal one." Judicium proclaimed. This Pegasus you see before you has been brought here from several years forward in the future."

"From the future?!" I gasped.

"Relative to your date of death." Judicium clarified. "While the future is fluid, time in the spirit world and time in the mortal world are disconnected. There is truthfully no proper way to describe this phenomenon in terms you are capable of comprehending."

"You have time travel powers, and are able to magically summon whoever you want from any point in time." I state, a bit brusquely. "Is that about right, Mr. Judicium?"

Being dead, and presiding as judge to determine whether I'm to be Eternally Rewarded or Eternally Damned... that leaves me wrong-footed enough. But I am not stupid. I am an academic, and not even DEATH can change that. I'll decide for myself what I'm capable of comprehending!

"A crude oversimplification, but fundamentally correct." Judicium consents. "To Film Critique, here, this is all simply a dream to fade with the dawn."

The Pegasus took the oath. He looked smug, content. Like he ruled the world.

"Film Critique, would you say the end result of Starlight's actions have made your life better?"

Film Critique chuckled. "I made my life better...but Starlight did set the stage for me! Before her big experiment with the castles, I was just another fat kid in high school no one cared about. Now I'm a king! So yeah, I guess you could say that. She sure granted MY wish."

I made his life better? Maybe I helped some ponies after all...he certainly sounds a lot happier...

"And would you say you're hurting anyone as 'king?'"

"Nah, everypony is happy to hang out with me now," Film Critique said, giving a...kind of creepy smile. "I even restored power to a city that lost it."

Ok...that doesn't sound so bad...

"No further questions," the winged unicorn that looked like me then smiled to the Pegasus. "I'm sure we'll be talking again rather soon."

Huh? What did that mean?

"No further questions," the defense proclaimed, then faced the prosecutor. "Your witness!" she told him, and he stood up.

He looked sadly at the stallion, kind of like how my parents would look at me when I got myself in trouble at school. What a strange place the spirit world was.

"Film Critique, how were you able to become a ruler?" the prosecutor asked.

"Oh, I found one of the shards of that Rainbow thing Starlight used to change the world. The blue one." He smiled at me. "Thanks for everything, babe!"

"No further questions." the prosecutor said, returning to his seat, but still giving Film Critique that strange sad look.

There was a pregnant sort of pause. All of us glanced around at each other. The prosecutor coughed, and looked at me expectantly.

"Um..." I say, "So... if neither the defense nor the prosecution have any further questions for Mr. Film Critique, here... what's supposed to be happening now?"

"Witnesses are not permitted to leave until the judge dismisses them." Judicium informed me.

"The judge? Oh! Me, okay... well, you're dismissed, I guess."

Judicium's horn shone and the Pegasus vanished... apparently, to awaken from this 'dream.'

"Would the prosecution like to call another witness?" I asked, refusing to let all the surreal-ness confound me.

"The prosecution calls Violet to the stands."

In a flash, a violet-colored pony, er, Earth Pony appeared at the witness stand. She was dressed up like a concubine in some Saddle Arabia movie...she looked so upset...violated.

After she took the oath, the prosecutor looked at her sadly. "Violet, how do you know Film Critique?"

The mare growled. "That monster...I was just trying to earn something, anything to get by...I lost everything when the world went to heck...Film Critique's using some kind of magical shard to make me feel...I'm not going to say ‘happy,' that would mean I enjoyed it, the feeling was as fake as this dress. I was so doped up that I didn't even care when he put me in his harem and...and..."

She looked like she was about to cry. What did's used the blue shard for that?! Is STILL using it, off in the future? Please no! I felt my heart sink...this...this was my fault...I split the Rainbow of Light up...that was my idea...


I was snapped out of my thoughts when the defense called out hysterically, slamming her hooves on the table in front of her.

I was taken aback. "O-on what grounds?"

"Starlight did not give the shard to Film Critique, nor did she tell him what to do with it. The gun maker isn't responsible for how someone uses their creations," she explained. that right?

"The prosecution admits this statement is true," the colt said, giving a small nod.

Yeah...that's right...but...the still ruined the world...Am I responsible for that?

"No further questions."

I face Judicium. "Judicium, sir... if I were to dismiss Violet, here, does that mean you're going to teleport her right back into Film Critique's harem?"


"Yes?! Alright, then, I refuse to dismiss Violet. She stays here."

"So be it, Your Honor. Only please be aware that you have effectively brought this trial to an utter standstill, and nothing can proceed until you dismiss her."

Nothing?! My bottom lifted the TINIEST bit off my judge's chair. One stony look from the Concept of Judgement, though, and I sat back down hard, smiling in fretful apology. Even Violet looked frightened to move.

Judicium's body language could not be plainer. Here we would all remain like statues in a diorama -- him, me, and the other three -- until I finally caved in. For eons, if need be. Frankly, Hell, itself would be preferable to such an infinite paralysis. And yet...

"Isn't there anyplace outside this courtroom? Somewhere we could dismiss Violet to instead... like a hotel or something?"

The Defense shook her head regretfully. "There ARE other places outside here, yes. But this is the Spirit World, Your Honor. Only two sorts of beings are suited to exist here: the dead and the deathless. Judicium's Court is one of the very few exceptions, where the living might visit. The others... well, they aren't hotels."

"Then surely, with all your time travel powers, you can transport Violet to some enlightened age with goodhearted people?!"

"I will not."

"WHY?!" I screamed.

"Because there are laws!" Judicium insisted. "And these laws must be honored!"

Violet sighed. "Send me back. It's okay. Doubt this freaky courtroom serves food, so at least the harem beats starving to death."

I bowed my head. "You are... dismissed, Violet."

The prosecutor whispered something to Violet that seemed to relax her before she vanished. They called more witnesses...Ponies whose lives were ruined now...because of the experiment I'd helmed...It can't be my fault...what else could I have done?

"The prosecution calls Twilight The First to the stand."


The pale unicorn appeared.

The prosecutor asked, "Twilight The First, you acted a hero for many centuries, correct?"


"What would have happened if the wish-spell had succeeded? Both to you and your fellow residents of Paradise Estate?"

"... we would have all ceased to exist."


"Why is that?"

"Because the sort of ideal world ponies would have wished for, would have had no monsters, and thus, no reason for heroes to exist to fight them. Therefore, we would have never existed."

"No further questions."

Bright Eyes and I... we had done this? To our friends? The ponies who had trusted us?

"W-would the defense care to cross-examine the witness?"

"Yes, Your Honor. Twilight The First. When did you figure out the wish-spell would cause you and all the residents of Paradise Estate to be erased from history?"

"We figured it out while we were all debating whether or not to give the Rainbow to Starlight."

They... they KNEW?

"So why did you choose to give it to her when you knew you'd never enjoy what you were helping bring about nor even be remembered for it?"

"Because... monster after monster, tyrant after tyrant, we kept knocking them down or redeeming them... but new ones always came up. We've seen ponies die horribly or strive for what they want most in their hearts and still end up with nothing. In the end, it was a unanimous vote. We wanted to help remake the world into what ponies have been TRYING to make it be since... forever."

"Why didn't you tell Bright Eyes, Starlight or any of the others right until near the end?"

"Because we believed what they were trying to do was good, and we didn't want them to hesitate for our sakes. They're good ponies, and they wouldn't want to sacrifice others just for themselves."

"So all of you gave the Rainbow of Light over, of your own free will, knowing full well what would happen?"


"Let the record show the Paradise Estate Ponies believed in what Starlight and her friends were doing, were willing to sacrifice themselves for it, and knew the price before giving the rainbow away! No further questions."

I dismissed her. Twilight, Ember, Wind Whistler, you had done all this, for us?

"The defense presents Exhibit A," the defense stated. That was when I noticed another mare sitting at the back of the courtroom. She was an Earth pony...but something seemed off about her...she made me scared just looking at her. She didn't react to anything. It was like she was...bored, not like Patch in math class but as if nothing interested her at all.

Judicium shook his head at me. "Do not make eye contact with that one, pretend she is not there," he advised me in a grave tone.

The defense attorney cleared her throat at the strange mare, who then gave an annoyed sigh.

Suddenly, I saw an entire world came rushing into my head!

After Revision:

I watch the spell power up, everything beginning. The castle shined bright, I knew six other castles were doing the same. Rainbow arches reached across Ponyland, connecting one castle with another. Then the entire sky glowed the colors of the rainbow. After years of hard work... the moment of truth! I look to myself, my fur begins to change. My fur was turning white, my mane became white with blue and white strips. I look back and wings begin to form. Looking out the window I see the whole island changing. Becoming more beautiful. Building are vanishing as the island becomes more tropical, changing shape. In their place are beautiful colorful tents. Even the castle we are in changes, before our eyes, becoming a natural part of the island.

Ponies are changing. Everypony is growing wings. They begin playing and dancing in the air without a care in the world. So is Rosey! Her cutie mark is changing, she's becoming a filly? Somewhere I feel Rosey's wish ripple past me, her wish to have a truly happy foalhood. Her crown and royal robes vanish. My wings are bigger than anypony else's, I'm taller too.

This is confusing, but I feel happy, it's working! I can feel it. Nothing is wrong. Everything is right with the world. Heh, the island is shaped like one big butterfly, tee-hee! The castle is shaped like one big butterfly! Look at the rainbow colored waterfall! It's so pretty! Fear and doubt don't exist. So many beautiful butterflies, they just want ponies to be happy too.

Bright Eyes...we did it.

Hello, I'm Star Maker! This is Butterfly Island, my home! Every day here is perfect, we're always having fun! But sometimes I wonder: why is it all I have to do is want something and it appears? Like ice cream. We pegasi want it, we get it, nothing else to it.

No pony knows, and when I want an answer no answer comes. Which doesn't make sense since we're supposed to have everything we want. 'Supposed to?' No pony else seems to want to know about THAT, but I'm just curious. Oh well, it doesn't ruin the mood too much! Why should it? I've got Star Song, Baby Honolu-Loo, and all my friends! What more could I want?!

Well, there is one thing. Honolu-Loo is the only foal I know! That's so cool! But...while we help take care of her, I wanted to have my own foal. I love taking care of her so much, it just feels so right. But she's the one and only foal and she's got her own family to care for her.

I can't quite explain how, but I'm going to have one. I know if I do...Something different will happen to me than everypony else in the world. Something called 'mortality.' I won't live forever anymore. Like the one or two ponies who have been in accidents and never wake up. But I know there's something after that, I just know it! That's one answer that came to me when I wanted it! And I just know this will be worth it!

The baby was inside me, then she came out and it REALLY hurt...but when it was over, and I saw her...It was worth it, the pain and what comes next are worth it.

I named her Star Catcher. She has these beautiful marks all over her. I love her so much, she makes me happy. Happy in a way I don't think I've ever been.

My body changes even after she stops aging. My mane is getting grey. But it doesn't matter. I'm still there to catch her when she fainted trying to catch the sun. Her wings are bigger than normal, I explain that just makes her special. We go stargazing together all the time with the others. They're starting to worry, they don't know what's happening to me...and I don't have the heart to tell them.

It's strange, when you know your life has an end, it has so much more meaning. And Star Catcher gives mine so much more than I ever thought possible. No life is meaningless, they're all special, I'm happy everypony is happy...but she's what makes my life meaningful.

It's time. I can feel it in my bones. I can't even get up today. But I'm not afraid. I just know something great is waiting for me. "Star Catcher...I need to tell you something."

She comes over to me, she looks scared. I know this won't be easy on her, but she's strong, she'll make it through. "Star Catcher, it's time for me to say goodbye."

She doesn't understand, how could she? "Where are you going?"

"That's not important...what's important is what I have to say to you," I look up and give her a smile. "I don't regret having you. Every day was endless happiness... but you were the first thing, the only thing, to give my life real meaning. Thank you, Star Catcher."

I'm standing next to my body, there's a big pegasus with a horn standing next to me. "It's time to go," he told me.

"I know. I've known for a long time..." I looked to Star Catcher as she tried to wake me up...she seemed to glow, kind of like the sun. I gave a smile. I knew she'd do something great.

Goodbye, Star Catcher. I love you.

After Disaster:

Everything...everything so happy, so one suffered...I was a Pegasus and I...I had a daughter...I grew old and died...But I died happy...

I panted. "What...what was that?"

"That was the world Starlight sought to create, Your Honor," the defense said happily.

"The world I would've created if the spell hadn't backfired?"

"Precisely! That is what the world would've been like if your experiment had worked," she continued. "Would it be fair to classify that world as a utopia?"

"...Yes...I would say so..."

"And isn't a utopia worth a risk? Sure, things may not have turned out as planned. But the world Starlight intended to create was worth a major risk to bring about. The ends justify the means, do they not?"

Do they? I...I'm not sure.

"The defense would like to call Star Maker to the stand."

I saw a light fly in and land at the stand, materializing into a Pegasus...The Pegasus I became in that vision...w-what did this mean?

"Star Maker, would you say that you were happy with the world you lived in?"

The Pegasus nodded. "Yes. Everypony was happy. I had a daughter who I loved with all my heart...Yes."

"No further questions." said the defense attorney.

"None from me, either," said the prosecutor.

"You're dismissed, Star Maker."

After Star Maker vanished, the winged unicorn looked to me. "Your Honor, that mare here just now was the mare Starlight would have transformed into, had her experiment succeeded."

"Wait...why've you been referring to me in the third person like that?" I asked, discombobulated again. "I am still Starlight, right? Death didn't change that, right?"

"Uh... no," said the defense, flustered. "You're still Starlight, Your Honor. It's just... well, it's just part of the protocol of this court."

I sighed. "Mama was right: I should've studied law."

"Your mother wanted you to inherit the Rainbow Beauty Salon from her until she saw how deeply becoming a teacher was your dream," Judicium said, "And chose your happiness over her own."

"Oh." Mother had never told me that. I knew she loved me, but I didn't even think that's what she'd have wanted.

"She didn't want you to feel guilty. And yes, she loves you absolutely."

The defense put her game face back on again. "Anyway, as you can see, Star Maker was happy and had a family of her own, isn't that a good thing?"

I was a mother?...I had a baby?...I had changed my name? She seemed happy...I...I seemed happy.

"The prosecution presents Exhibit B," the colt said. Once more the bored mare had to be prodded by the prosecutor to do...whatever it was she seemed to be doing.

I saw...Buddy, Lancer...all of my friend's boyfriends and husbands...they became mares...their personalities completely changed...I hardly recognized them...I could hardly tell them apart.

"What...what was that?"

"That was the fate of the stallions your friends loved. In the utopia Starlight sought, stallions did not exist," said the colt.

No stallions? Whyever not? can't be...

"The prosecution calls Pandemonium Atë Typhon," the colt called.

Another...another of those chimera creatures appeared in the witness chair. This one was female, and composed of completely different animals. She seemed a rather cheerful sort.


"I kind of prefer Pandora, if you don't mind."

"Pandora, you are the Draconequus representing imagination, correct?"

"Yep! And hallucinations, but ponies don't seem to like those as much for some reason."

"So you know what ponies wishes were for when the experiment happened, correct?"


"What were Starlight's wishes?"

Please no...don't let her say it...

"Well, let's see, she wanted the world to be all beautiful like Bright Eyes wanted. She wanted there to be no conflict, her friends to be happy...Oh, and that there wouldn't be any stallions."

No...I...I didn't think that would...I mean I wanted it but...After that colt hurt me... I just wanted the stallions to disappear...but I didn't mean for it to actually happen!

I was beginning to cry. "Your Honor, Starlight may have given herself a family, but her wish also robbed countless mares of the stallions they loved... of romances that might have bloomed. They were fortunate to have changed into mares, rather than vanish from existence."

"T-There MUST have been mares wishing for stallions! Lots of them! Boy-crazy, lonely-hearted... could my one wish have overridden ALL of their dreams?!"

"Starlight's wish was granted because she was at the epicenter of the spell when it was cast."

That... makes horrible SENSE...

"I...I didn't mean to do that! I...I just didn't want to get hurt again!" I cried. How could I have done that to my friends?!

"For the world your spell would've created, Starlight... do you accept responsibility for the obliteration of an entire gender?" he asked.

"...Yes...I do..."

"Are you sorry?"

"Of course I am...I'm sorry..."

"No further questions." The prosecution eyed the defense, who just shook her head.

"Would you like a hug?" Pandemonium asked me.

"You're dismissed!" I snap, and Judicium sent her away.

The winged unicorn gave a glare. "Touché, but this isn't over."

The defense then called several other ponies from the utopia world...I got names, but I couldn't really tell who was who...they all seemed so alike. All their answers amounted to the same thing: they loved their world and it was 'super fun'...they all seemed so happy. After the last one, (Sweetberry, I think,) the prosecution, who'd passed until then, finally retook the floor.

"The prosecution wishes to revisit Exhibit B," said the colt.

The memories came to my mind again. I saw my friends during the reformation of the world...No...They...they turn into those ponies I just saw! But...But I couldn't recognize them! I couldn't even tell them apart! Why?!

"The world produced by the spell produced a populace of little-to-no individuality. Most everyone was identical in terms of personalities. This stemmed from the fact that Starlight did NOT anticipate wishes such as 'I wish everypony was more alike.' or 'I wish everypony agreed with each other more.'" The colt didn't sound condemning, he sounded...impartial, if that's even possible.

I should've caught that! How could I not have seen such an obvious flaw?!

"OBJECTION!!!" the defense called. "The entire team of scientists missed the mark on that, to blame Starlight alone is unfair."

"Isn't it likewise unfair for all the members of Starlight's team to not share an equal percentage of blame?" the colt replied. "Or should Starlight deny responsibility for her part in the oversight, and pass the buck completely on Bright Eyes and her subordinates?"

"What is your choice?" Judicium asked me.

I held my head. How was I having a headache if I was dead? I was responsible for my part in it? But they should take responsibility for theirs? What did that mean?! Am I guilty or not?!

"...Objection...overruled..." I said. I needed time to think. "...Does the prosecution want to call a witness?"

"No," he said simply, sitting back down.


"The Defense calls Minty to the stands!" she announced.

A green mare with a pink mane and a pepper mint Cutie Mark appeared in the stands. She was... she had been Clover. "Minty, how are you different from your friends?"

"Oh! Well, I collect socks, I'm kind of clumsy, I like cucumbers on my pizza, oh! And I love the color green!" the pony announced.

"Thank you, Minty."

And after the prosecution passed on cross-examining her, I dismissed Minty.
Then the defense called several ponies to the stands, asked them how they were different from their friends. A unicorn said her horn glowed constantly and showed classic social anxiety as a result, an earth pony named Kimono was knowledgeable and the one others looked to for advice, another Earth Pony named Rainbow Dash loved fashion, an earth pony named Wysteria said she was shy and loved gardening. On and on.

"As I've shown, there IS individuality in this world Starlight meant to create," said the Defense. "Each pony is clearly unique and one-of-a-kind!"

"The Prosecution agrees that this is true, but also points out this sampling of ponies represents the exception, not the rule. While ponies of Starlight's utopia were capable of becoming individuals... few sadly did."

And my friends still weren't my friends...they weren't the ponies they used to be. The Prosecutor didn't call a witness. "D-Defense?"

"I call Destruction Shiva Typhon to the stands!"

The chimera appeared in the witness chair. He held an ice pack to his head...He'd been there. What had he been doing there?

He went to say something to the defense attorney, but she shushed him. "Destruction, please state your job for the court."

"I make things that aren't supposed to exist anymore go boom! That's what I do," he said in a strangely child-like voice.

"Is it true that YOU caused the explosion?" the defense asked.

"Yep! I did...That was kind of messed up!"

HE did it?! That's it! My experiment HADN'T backfired at all! It had been sabotaged by this thing! This obviously mad bomber! It wasn't my fault!...Then why doesn't that make me happy?

"The defense would like to ask why Starlight should be held responsible for something Destruction caused?" the defense asked. "It is NOT her fault, therefore she should be considered not guilty. No further questions."

The colt walked over to Destruction. "Destruction, how did you cause the explosion?"

"Oh! Well I made all those conflicting wishes and dreams NOT overlap each other and happen all at once! That made the whole thing go boom! I didn't really have to do much actually!"

"What?" I found myself asking aloud. "What...what was he saying?"

"I believe he means that he merely set off a bomb that was already in place." Judicium explained.

A bomb that was

"And why did you cause the explosion?" the defense asked.

"Oh! Because all those conflicting dreams would've fought and fought until they tore the universe apart and everything would die! And not even with a bang! It would've just faded away! So I had to make it all go boom! To make it so that didn't happen!"

What...The dreams would've......the conflicting dreams would've... I don't even remember dismissing Destruction.

"Prosecution...c-call your n-next witness..." I stuttered, just going through the motions. How could I be so dumb?!

Why did I not realize the conflicting dreams would've caused trouble?! Had I really thought that excluding the dreams of the violent and sociopathic would've been the only consideration Had I really expected no two dreams would be at odds?!

What naïveté! What idiocy! The spell was meant to grant ALL wishes, including ones that were mutually contradictory!

If Destruction hadn't intervened...The spell would just keep rewriting reality, trying to make the world work in such a way that allowed mutually contradictory wishes to both be granted...It's like taking hundreds of random people and assign them to build a skyscraper with no actual collaboration or leadership! Miraculous to get something that wouldn't instantly collapse...

"The Prosecution would like to state at this point that all the ponies working on the project are equally at fault for not anticipating this fatal flaw with the spell." the colt explained. "That said, Starlight needs to take responsibility for the part in it SHE played."

There it was again...I must take responsibility and so should the others? But...does that mean every one of us on the team are all each 100% at fault... or do we all get 5% of the sum total fault? I...I just don't know...

I just wanted this to be over...why is the bored mare back there looking at me? She seems...vaguely interested in me...

"The defense calls Bon Bon to the stands," the alicorn me called, Bon Bon appearing in the witness chair...

"Bon Bon, how do you feel about Starlight?" she asked.

"Starlight? I miss her..."

"Do you blame her for what she did?"

"Of course not...she's my friend. It wasn't all her fault either...I know she didn't WANT to cause what happened."

"No further questions."

The Prosecutor stood up. "Bon Bon, is it not true that because of the accident, your sister has died and you are left raising your niece?"

Bon Bon looked so sad... "Yes...that's true..."

Bon Bon...I'm...I'm so sorry...It's my fault...

"And do you feel any anger towards Starlight for that?"

Bon Bon actually looked a bit angry. "Of course not! She didn't mean to do this!"

"But do you admit she's at least partly responsible for what happened? You're under oath."

"Yes...She was part of the project so I guess she is...But I'm not angry with her!"

"So you forgive Starlight for her part in the accident?"

"Of course! Why wouldn't I?"

What?...She forgive me? After everything I caused...she forgives me?        

"No further questions." more questions? Isn't he supposed to be trying to prove I'm guilty?

The Defense gave a snarl while I dismiss Bon Bon. "The defense calls Patch to the stands."

Patch...she seems so strong now...She'd never been one to take exercise... or anything... seriously. But now she looked like an amazon...

"Patch, how do you feel about Starlight?"

"Starlight? I've been looking everywhere for her! I just want to find her."

"Do you blame her for what happened?"

"Of course not!...If it's anyone's fault, it's mine for finding Paradise Estates in the first place..."

No...please don't let her blame herself...It's not her fault!...Please don't blame yourself...        
The Defense snarled. "No further questions!"

The Prosecutor came forwards. "Patch, is it not true that the world is degrading because of the accident?"

Patch sighed. "I guess so...The only city I've seen with working power was the one that rotten Pegasus was in charge of."

"Film Critique, you mean?"

"If we're speaking of the harem king with the blue shard... then, yes."

"And is it also true that you've endured a great deal of personal pain because of that fateful day? And you've taken it upon yourself to reassemble the seven shards of the Rainbow of Light to restore the world from its current state of dystopia?"

"...I'd be lying if I said no. But I'm not blaming Starlight for that! I chose to do it. And it ain't all bad! Me and Buddy got married, I'm a mom! Maybe that might've happened anyway without the world going to Pony Hell, but I won't trade it for anything!"

What? She actually...she finally tied the knot?!

"Do you admit that Starlight has some responsibility for what happened?"

Patch looked down. "...It was her idea...hers and Bright Eyes...but she didn't do anything wrong!"

"One does not have to intentionally do wrong to commit a wrong. Do you forgive Starlight for what happened?"

Patch nodded without hesitation. "Of course! She's my friend! I know she didn't want any of this to happen! I forgive her."

"No further questions."

And it went the same for the others...Sweetheart, Melody, Bright Eyes, and Clover...they all missed me...they all forgave me...And each time they did, the defense seemed to get a little angrier...But why? This was so BACKWARD!

"A-anymore witnesses?"

Both sides shook their heads. "The prosecution rests."

"The defense rests too. But I would like to talk with the defendant for a moment," the defense said.

I found myself sitting in the chair next to the defense attorney...but like before, I was in the judge's chair at the same time...

"Listen, Starlight. What do you think will happen if you give a guilty verdict? If you go to the bad place? To Hell? You know what Pony Hell is like, my little pony?" the defense attorney seemed so terrifying for some reason...Why did she seem so scary?! Was I really this intimidating to my friends?

"Ponies in Pony Hell are hitched to a massive chariot ridden by Fear Incarnate, which they are forced to pull across a scorching, horrible desert for all eternity, with only the screams of their fellow tortured souls and the Emperor of Terror's laughter to keep them company."

I could see it...I could hear it...All the screaming...The laughter, it'd make my heart stop if I wasn't already dead! The air is so hot I feel like I'm roasting alive! But the ground beneath my hooves, it's so cold my hooves feel like they're going to shatter! The chariot chains aren't wrapped around me, they're IN my skin!...It never never ends...we just pull...forever...But the worst part is...despite everyone suffering with me...I'm alone...

I...I was back in the chair, away...away from that horrid place...I was afraid...terrified...I don't think I've EVER been so scared in my entire life! Or my afterlife... short as it's been, so far...

"Just thought you should know what's at stake if you decide wrong," she said, looking me in the eyes. "Understood?"

I slowly nodded and was...back in the judge's seat.

"What is your choice?" asked Judicium. "It is time to choose. Are you guilty or innocent?"

Guilty or innocent? Why did I have to decide?! I...Even my friends admitted I was responsible...And I am...I should've made absolutely sure of everything before I let the experiment start! Yes, Destruction set it off...but I made the bomb! And if he hadn't, everything would've been much worse!

But...but I'm so scared...I don't want to go to Pony Hell...Just thinking about made me shudder! The chariot, that laughter, the screams...And...and if I went there I just know I'd never see my friends again!

But if I say I'm not guilty...then aren't I just as bad? To say everything that came about because of the experiment doesn't matter? That I'm not responsible for any of it? I can't do that...I'd be lying to myself...How could I look my friends in the eye when we get to Pony Heaven and tell them that I'm innocent?

"...I find the defendant...Starlight...guilty..." I finally said. Did I know what might happen? Of course. Was I terrified? Yes...but I had to do what's right...

The Defense gave a cry of rage. "No! You can't do that!"

"I can, and I did."

The colt looked up at me with those eyes. "Do you feel Starlight should be forgiven?"

"I don't deserve it."

"No one deserves forgiveness, Starlight...Forgiveness and mercy are to be given."

"Is that so? In that friends already forgave me...and I accept it from them...I want it...Even if I don't think I deserve it."

"...It is so...You are forgiven..."

"Darn you!" yelled the defense suddenly, throwing over the table. The mare in the back just facehoofed. "You aren't supposed to be forgiven! You were supposed to say you're innocent!"

"I'm sorry to disappoint you, ma'am, but I just can't do that...It wouldn't be right."

The winged unicorn me looked like she was about to throw a tantrum. Her eyes flamed, and she looked like she was going to run over to me and hoof me across the face...I began to back away, shaking. Then suddenly smiled with a chuckle. "Well, That Was Fun," she said, but now the voice sounded sent a chill down my spine just hearing it.

"If You Say So, Havoc," said the colt.

The mare at the back merely rolled her eyes.

Suddenly, the courtroom faded away into nothing. The little colt spread two huge wings and covered himself in them, transforming into a massive winged unicorn. He looked like a massive cutout of the night sky in the form of a pony...The stars seemed so far away but so close all at once...And he seemed to be a colt and a stallion at the same time, not like he alternated, but like he was both at once. I could see the tips of his horns and wings, but when I tried to follow one from top to bottom, that just kept going endlessly.

Looking at him I felt like I was so small...but I felt like I I was important. It wasn't was just impossible to describe.

He draped one wing over me. Between me and...something else...something that made me afraid just being near...and another that made me feel so pointless...but being close to made that go away. I felt safe, I felt important.

"Well, Buddy, That Was The Most Fun I've Had In A Very Long Time, We Should Do This Again Sometime!" said that voice the other me had had...but now it seemed so terrifying...the only thing that stopped me from going into shock was the big winged unicorn being made the fear go away as soon as it happened.

"If We Must, Havoc."


"Oh Come On, You Know You Enjoyed That Short Moment Where It Looked Like She Was Going To Give Up Hope!"


"Because I Thought You'd Have Fun!"


"Oh You Didn't Enjoy One Thing?"


I was suddenly not afraid...Afraid? What's afraid?

"I Don't Care!"

Oh, right afraid is when you're scared...I don't know how to describe what just happened...

"Now Come On, Dear, Let's Head Back To My Domain."


"Because That Fat Pegasus Should Be Arriving Soon, I've Got A Great Idea On How To Welcome Him, The Terror On His Face Should Be Fabulous!"


"Because You Can Watch The Soul Crushing Despair That Comes With The Realization That He's Doomed For Eternity."


The big unicorn lifted his wing and there was no one there. "What's going on?"

"You Were Judging Your Own Soul."

" I go to Pony Hell now?"

"No, You Do Not."

"But I was guilty..." Now I was confused.

"And Admitting That Is Why Your Soul Was Saved. You Admitted Responsibility For Your Actions And Sought Forgiveness For Them. So You May Now Enter Pony Heaven."

"So I'd have gone to Pony Hell if I'd said I was innocent?"

"Yes. Those Who Cannot Take Responsibility For Their Wrongdoing Cannot Be Saved. It Is Not That I Will Not Let Them In, But That They Cannot Get In."

"...You don't mince words much..."

"I Am Truth, I Do Not Lie."

"I understand." I lick my ghostly lips. "Still, you do things VERY weird around these parts. What was all that? Who are you? Who were They?"

"One Cannot Enter An Afterlife To Which They Do Not Belong. And Neither I Nor Havoc Could Claim Your Soul While It Was In Conflict. My 'Name' Does Not Translate Properly Into Sounds. There Are Many Approximations: 'He Who Is All And All Is Him', 'The Universe', 'Father Of All Alicorns', 'The Fifth Concept', 'The Hierophant,' 'Wisdom,' 'Sanity,' 'The Perfect Existence,' Reality,' 'The Spirit World.' As For The Other Two, Your 'Defense' was Havoc, Mass Hysteria And Fear Incarnate, The King of Fears, Emperor of Terror, Father Of All Fears, Forger Of The Survival Instinct, The Resting Place Of Lost Souls. His Colleague, The Bored One, Was His Wife Entropy, The Embodiment Of All That Will Cease, Queen Of Oblivion, Empress Of Not, Nothingness, Anti-Mother Of All Things."

"...Was this all some sort of game between you two?"

"To Havoc It Was. To Me, It Was A Fight To Save A Child From Herself."


"To Havoc, Nothing Is Serious, Everything Is A Game. Do Not Take This As Him Being Uncaring, He Does Have A Form Of Compassion Towards Ponies, It Is He That Provides The Survival Instinct, He Takes Joy When Fear Saves Lives. But His Morality Is So Alien Compared To Yours And Mine That To Attempt To Describe It In Terms You Could Understand Is Impossible."

"He's a psychopath." I say.

"No." He says simply. "You Are Thinkings In Terms Of Psychosis And Psychology. His Morals Are No Less Real Than Yours. And A Psychopath Can Not Control Themselves, Nor Can They Control Their Impulses. You Are Describing One Of His Sons. Havoc Does Care For His Children And Family. Which Has Left A Mark Between Himself And His Wife Ever Since She...

"To Havoc's Wife, Entropy, Nothing Has Value, For All Things Of The Physical Universe Will One Day Belong To Her As She Claims It To Lay The Groundwork For A New Universe."

"And you?"

"To Me, All Things Have Value. No Life Is Without Meaning. To Me, You Are No Less Important To Me Than My Own Children. I Love You, Starlight, As I Do All Life."

I believed was just...I knew he wouldn't lie to me...

"Then why did he act so angry when I didn't do what he wanted?"

"Because It Amused Him To Do So."

"So he acted like he was angry because he thought it was funny?"

"Yes. Havoc Saw Himself As An Actor Playing A Role. When He Saw He Was Losing, He Decided To Just Have Fun With It."

"Well... at least all the damned souls in Pony Hell got a BRIEF respite from pulling his chariot forever, right?"

"There are actually shadows of nothingness who try to steal place of souls within Havoc. Havoc gave an 'incomplete' view of his domain. Now, Starlight, It Is Time For You To Enter Pony Heaven."

"Where is it?"

"I Am Pony Heaven. Or, To Put It In Terms You Can Comprehend, It Is Contained Within My Body."

I slowly put my hoof up and touched him. It looked like it touched water and passed through. Just having a part of me inside him made me can't put it into words...It wasn't fake, it was so real, so wonderful...But I pulled my hoof back.

"...Could I...maybe wait?"

"Why Do You Wish To Wait?"

"...My friends all miss me...I want to be there to greet them when they come..." I said, looking up at him. They all missed me, they all forgave me. It just seemed right."

"While That Is In My Power To Permit, What You Ask For Falls Within The Domain Of My Son, Mortis. I Do Not Wish To Encroach On His Free Will By Denying Him The Choice. Mortis!"

Mortis suddenly appeared and bowed to the Father of All Alicorns. There was a golden maned white Earth Pony with him. "Yes, Father?"

"Starlight Desires To Wait For Her Friends To All Pass On Before She Enters Into Me With Them. Do You Permit This?"

Mortis looked to me, and nodded, a small smile playing on his lips. "A noble desire. A soul cannot pass on if it has unfinished business, for it will be unable to rest in peace. Therefore, I permit this."

I gave a bow. "Thank you, Mortis." The Earth Pony suddenly spoke.

"You are Starlight, correct?" asked the pony.

"Yes, that's me."

"Your friend Patch is a true knight, I am proud to have been able to know her," he said.

I gave a smile. "Thanks. She is a good friend."

The Father of Alicorns looked to the pony, a smile on His face. "I Am Glad To See You, Squire. Your Father Has Been Waiting For You."

The pony entered into the Father when it hit me. "Squire? The pony who Patch told that story about?"

Mortis nodded. "Yes, Patch helped him finish his unfinished business. His soul could finally pass on come, I will guide you to where you can watch your friends."

"Ok. Goodbye, Squire."

"Goodbye Starlight," I heard Squire speak through the Father. "Please tell Dame Patch when you see her that I miss her, and will see her soon."

"I will."

Mortis bowed deeply to The Father, and opened a door. We stepped inside, and I was back in my old office.

I looked at Mortis with a confused expression on my face. "What am I doing here? The school was destroyed in the explosion, right?"

Mortis nodded. "It is customary for a watcher to wait in a place of familiarity and comfort," he explained. "This room contained many wonderful memories for you, and those memories will sustain you as your wait for your friends."

He walked over to a large window. "This window will allow you to see your friends' lives pass and give you glimpses of the future that you have seen."

He touched his hoof to one of the panes of glass, and it rippled like a mirror. I saw Patch and an odd brown pony holding up something like a shard of jagged glass. He swiped his hoof across the glass, and the scene melted, reforming into a pastel pony land. The scene vanished in a second, and I sank to the ground, stunned.

He smiled a small smile at me. "You will be able to see your friends and be with them in spirit until they come to meet you, and you will also see your life, what is and what will be. Good journey, noble Starlight. When you are ready, I will come and take you and your charges to my Father."

"Th-thank you." I felt like I was going to sob.

Mortis nodded at me once more, and left without another word.

I pulled a chair in front of the window. "I know this is selfish, but I need to see what could have been, at least for me."

I touched the window with my hoof, and an image came up. I saw Patch walking through a forest. I sent up a silent prayer to the Father for her safety. I swiped my hoof across the mirror again, imitating Mortis's movements.

After the Transformation:

The forest became a very sparkly and pink town. I saw a cobble stone street and beautiful houses, and lots of smiling ponies. Some were skating around and one pony was lying on the grass, writing in a diary. I was having a hard time telling them apart, though.

Side effect of the spell, remember there, Starlight? I shook my head. "No time for that. Now, how do I move this thing around? Hmmm..." I fiddled around with my hoof again. "Maybe I could control it like this again....Ahh, there we go!" The view on the window changed. I saw into a kind of ice cream parlor. I saw three ponies clustered around a table, sipping milkshakes.

A green pony with a candy cutie mark, Minty(Clover?), said,

"These milkshakes are so super delicious, Sweetberry!"

A pony with two berries and a flower as a cutiemark was blushing. Sweetie Berry, Bon-Bon. "Why thank you so much! I am so glad you enjoyed them! I made them especially for my friends!"

They all began to giggle. Maybe it's an in-joke? I didn't see anything particularly funny.

"Hey, you guys, has anyone seen Star Catcher?" The other pony with a balloon Cutie Mark at the table asked.

Star Catcher? The daughter of the pony I became in that world-which-wasn't! They might know where my daughter, er, Star Maker's daughter is! I pressed my ear to the glass in excitement. Maybe I can find out where she is!

"I haven't seen her," answered Sweetberry.

"Me neither," said the green pony. "I'm sure she'll turn up later, Pinkie Pie!"

Drat!...But at least she has friends who care about her, that's what counts.

Pinkie Pie fiddled with her straw. "Yeah, I guess...Hey, did you guys all see Rainbow Dash's new outfit?"

"Oh, yeah, she always dresses in style!"

"Yeah! I wish I could dress like her!" The three ponies began a very detailed conversation about Rainbow Dash's various fashions.

Okay, when they lapse into conversations about dresses, it is time for me to go. I thought. Now, how will I be able to go to Star Maker? I want to see myself...of course, I...they don't know her, Star Maker must of died long before this. So how do I look further back? This thing doesn't really have instructions. Well, I might as well try this. I tapped my hoof on the glass. "Take me to Star Maker!"

The parlor disappeared in a flash of light, and the Pegasus I saw from my vision appeared on the screen.

"Woah!" I took a step back from the window. "I wasn't really expecting that to happen!"

The Pegasus called Star Maker was smiling and laughing, playing with a little white Pegasus filly on an island with only Pegasi. She looked different from all of the other ponies that I saw in town. They looked all like carbon copies of each other, while she just looked, different. More alive or aware, maybe? I couldn't explain it. She looked so happy.

I felt a tear slide down my face. I will be with you, Star Maker. May your life remain this happy forever.

Through that magic window I was able to be with my friends through their lives. I cried and laughed, gasped and cheered along with them. I saw Patch, brave Patch, trying to put right what I helped cause. I saw Bright Eyes being cared for by her husband, never giving up. I was so grateful for Clover, fate was kind to her, her simple dreams and wishes protecting her from damage from the backwashed spell. I saw Sweet Heart helping others in the destroyed world, Bon Bon desperately writing down the history of a dead world, and Melody losing her voice, but still being the Melody I had always known.

I would be there for them, all of them, when they came here, and I was.


Twilight looked up from the insert in Bon-Bon's journal regarding Starlight. "So ... I was Clover before I was Minty?"

"No Twilight Sparkle," Princess Luna said, "You were Twilight Sparkle before you were Twilight Sparkle. You may continue to carry Minty's heart, just as Minty continued to carry Clover's heart, but that doesn't under any circumstances make you either of them."

"Weird. I can't find who I was in the old generation," Pinkie Pie said looking through a mountain of papers and sticky notes that read 'Author's notes.' "Well, I know a part of me is Surprise when I intercepted her shadow, and I took Princess Rarity's light when she ... when she passed on when... everything changed, but I can't find where the rest of me came from."

Princess Luna said, "Perhaps the remaining four entries will shed light on that subject."

"Oh! You're right!" Pinkie Pie nodded, she tossed the papers aside. "I really really really really really really really really REALLY HOPE it doesn't take as long to get the next one written, I mean for us to read it. This side saga hasn't even been posted on yet! We've got four more entries to go! This better get done before the new story arc, er, before anything major happens. I better get some more snacks!"


"Of course you can help!"

Twilight looked at the remaining entries. Sweetheart. Melody. Bright Eyes. Clover. She wondered what truths their little pony tales would reveal if any.

"So Starlight, she was the leader of her friends' circle?"

"Until they became adult mares and went their separate ways in life. That is the nature of growing up Twilight Sparkle, but rest assured, they never stopped being friends. Friendship is a force that pierces time. You and your friends indirectly taught me that. Even if separated by a thousand years, the light of friendship can still pierce the darkness."
2013 February 18th
The writers who volunteered for writing the remaining stories are suffering under pressure and could really use some help! So if you can help take some of the burden off them, please do so! [link]

AN INDEPENDENT audio adaption is being made for the 7 Dreams/Nightmare Gaiden Pony POV Series! You heard right! Please click the link below to the journal page! These guys don't have all the resources Louis has, SO PLEASE!!!! ANY HELP! Be it original music, art, or voices, WILL ALL BE GREATLY APPRECIATED!

Pony POV Series Side Story. This entry is for Starlight chapter was written by Acalanthide. [link]

Patch's Chapter has to be broken into two parts due to length:

Bon-Bon's Chapter:

Starlight's Chapter Part 1: [link]
Starlight's Chapter Part 2: You Are Here

A story about the seven My Little Pony Tales saga and their experiences at the moment the world changed, in both timelines that lead to G3 and to G4, as recorded by Princess Luna.

The other four stories will be written as the other authors write them. I just write the framing device, YOU GUYS are the ones writing the stories for the rest. But sure to give them plenty of encouragement! [link]

Pinkie Pie, "Seriously! These guys need your good karma readers!"

Music suggestion By Kendell2
Starlight sees the devastation: Future Goku's Death Theme - History of Trunks.

Introduction of the Defense: Objection Theme -Ace Attorney

Introduction of the Prosecutor: Professor Layton Vs Ace Attorney theme.

Starlight Accepting Forgiveness: This Broken Soul - The Legend of Spyro: The Eternal Night.

The reveal of the Defense's Identitiy: BGM Discord Appears- My Little Pony Friendship Is Magic

Starlight Waiting For Her Friends: Don't Ever Forget - Pokemon Mystery Dungeon Explorers of Time/Darkness/The Sky.

MLP FiM: Copyright Hasbro

The Pony POV Series Trope Page is feeling neglected. You can help keep it up to date! So many characters and so little description on the 'minor' ones. [link]

Check out the recursive fanfiction and fanart of the Pony POV Series! [link] Many of it approved by me as canon.

Did anyone else know about us now being on Fan Labor Wiki? This is a surprise to me.


2013 January 26th evening: Edited via Richforce's comments and some new twists provided by Louis.

2013 March 27 Image by Mn27 [link]
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The chapter continues with Starlight coming to her senses after the spell has failed and levelled the castles into the ground. She sees confused spirits next to their bodies while other ponies cry and suffer. Briefly the pony is able to see Destruction before he vanishes into nothing. Starlight wonders if this all was his fault or if maybe her spell was responsible. Suddenly Mortis and Pensilis arrive at the scene. We also hear Mortis’s full name: Mortis Thanatos (Greek personification of death and the term Sigmund Freud used for the death drive) Charon (the Greek ferryman of Hades), the 13th (Death is the 13th tarot card): The Concept of Death. The Alicorn of Death came for Starlight while Pensilis came for Misty who shielded her child at the cost of her own life. The realisation of her death is painful but Starlight is able to accept it. Soon Mortis leads her to the one who will judge her. And suddenly she finds herself in a courtroom but something seems strange. She is told by the Concept of Balance, Judgment, and Fair Say (Judicium) that she will judge her own soul, that she is both defendant and judge. Starlight soon notices that this seems too easy and that there must be more to it. Judicium will merely explain the basic rules to her, the rest is up to Starlight herself. It is time for the opening statements for now.

Only at this point does the pony notice who the defence attorney is: An Alicorn version of herself. Just looking at this version fills her with pride and the shining cutie mark reminds her somewhat of a magician's magic. She briefly remembers that the Magician is another tarot and if you had paid attention to the Alicorns, then you might notice that this concept is suspiciously missing in the group that was shown so far. Apparently the defence attorney learned everything about presentation from the Phoenix Wright School Of Awesome Law And Objections. In an over the top fashion she makes clear that she will convince the judge that the client is innocent. To Starlight’s surprise the prosecutor seems to be a colt, about seven or eight years old. He merely states that her actions led to this catastrophe and that she should take responsibility for that. Thankfully this prosecutor is nothing like the ones of the Ace Attorney series. On one side Starlight is understandable terrified of the idea of going into hell but she is also frightened by the possibility that it was her fault that all these ponies suffered and died. The defence attorney calls her client as the first witness and suddenly Starlight is in two places at once. Physics don’t apply to the spirit world like they do to the mortal plane and the possibilities seem endless, for example Shining Armor could be an entire hoofball team all by himself. As the prosecutor asks her, Starlight says that their goal was to create a utopia for the entire world. It was Bright Eye’s idea but Starlight was the one who made it happen by handling the details of the organisation. The defence attorney wants to know if she was careful and the pony tells them truthfully that she, Bright Eyes and the other scientists checked everything multiple times. She has no idea what could have gone wrong. The defence doesn’t try to get any deeper into the issue while the prosecutor wants to know if she realised the risks that were involved. She has to admit that she knew that it could go wrong and before the spell was activated she was quite nervous about it. But she would have never expected anything like this to happen.

Next the defence calls for Film Critique, the fat pegasus ruling over a city with the power of a shard of the rainbow of light. Thanks to the different rules of this place and the powers of the Alicorns this is possible. The defence attorney gets Critique to say that the consequences of Starlight’s actions did improve his life, that everybody is happy around him and that he managed to restore the power of the city with the shard. Since we have already seen what this means from Patch’s chapter we know how horrible that actually is and the Starlight Alicorn is sure that she will meet this pegasus again very soon. Meanwhile the prosecutor seems sad about Film Crittique’s choices and asks how he became ruler. Only now does the pegasus point out that he found the blue shard and used that to make his dreams and everybody else’s nightmares come true. Soon Film Critque is dismissed and Violet, one of the unfortunate members of his harem is called at this witness. Starlight can see her pain. The witness reveals that the Pegasus used the shard on her to fill her with mindless fake happiness, so that he could do anything with her, including raping her. Starlight is absolutely shocked to see where the idea to split up the rainbow leaded. This would have never been possible if the rainbow would have stayed a single entity. The defence attorney gives a glorious over the top Objection, Phoenix Wright would be proud. The Alicorn Starlight proclaims that her client didn’t give Film Critique the shard and could not know that it would end up in his hoofs. Now Starlight is unsure again if she is her fault or not. What could she have done differently? There were so many things she didn’t know. Before Violet is sent back, the Alicorn Starlight tells her something that calms her down a bit. Maybe she tells her how Film Critique will end (here is a free hint: never put real weapons into the reach of your harem) or what will happen to him AFTERWARDS. More victims of the Dark Age are called and Starlight is still unable to feel responsible for that. It seems so distant and unconnected with what she did.

Then Twilight The First is called. The prosecutor lets her reveal what would have happened to her and the rest of the Paradise Ponies if the spell had succeeded: They would have stopped existing. A world without monsters doesn’t need heroes. Starlight is crushed by what horrible fate she had unleashed on the ponies that were her friends. The defence brings to light that they knew this fact before giving them the rainbow. They saw that the fight against monsters and tyrants was a never-ending struggle and it would NEVER be over. There would always be victims and crushed dreams, so they decided to sacrifice themselves to create a world where they wouldn’t be needed. They knew that Bright Eyes and Starlight would have hesitated if they knew that and didn’t tell them this truth. Starlight is absolutely amazed of what her friends were willing to do for them and the rest of the world. By now she also notices a strange earth pony that doesn’t seem to be interested in anything at all and Judicium advices her to not stare at her. Now the defence shows her first exhibit: A vision from the lost world.

Everything changed. The landscape and the buildings became something else, Starlight becomes a pegasus and is noticeable bigger then the others and finally Rosey becomes a filly free of the burden of being a ruler and with the happy childhood she always wanted. Their minds and personalities begin to change as well. Starlight becomes Star-Maker and is happy with the state of the world but at the same time she wonders how it does even work. Why do they suddenly have anything they can wish for? Nobody knows the answer and this is one of the things she can’t simply wish for. Otherwise she would have realised what she had lost. It seems something of her scientific mind survived the rewrite. She likes to spend time with Honolu-Loo (likely the new Rosey) but since the filly has her own family, Star-Maker wishes she could have a child of her own. When she was Starlight she wasn’t able to have a family because of her bad luck with stallions but this time it can come true. She knows that her wish will come true but that there is a prize to pay. To bring a new life into this world, Star-Maker has to sacrifice her own immortality and will die. She knows this and still thinks that it is worth it. The birth is painful but seeing the child makes more then up for it. What is the name of the child? She names her Star-Catcher, it is Celestia reborn as a pegasus. And she makes her mother so happy, happier then she ever was before. As she becomes slowly older, she still tries her best to be there for her child. From time to time the child tries to catch the sun and she loves stargazing. While Star-Maker’s time is limited now, a short truly happy and meaningful life is worth more then an eternity of happiness given by a world-changing spell. The other ponies are not able to understand that she is dying and Star-Maker doesn’t want to trouble them with that.

Eventually she knows that her time has come and she is extremely curious what awaits her in the afterlife but there is something she has to do first. Star-Maker tells her daughter that it is time to say goodbye and she never regretted having her. Every day with her was pure happiness and in this perfect world she was the only thing that gave Star-Maker’s life meaning. Eventually she dies and Mortis leads her into the afterlife but in the last moments she can see glimpses of what Star-Catcher will become later. In the courtroom Starlight is shocked by this vision and the defence points out that it would have been a utopia. The Alicorn Starlight claims that creating such a paradise was well worth any risk. She also calls Star-Maker as a witness to confirm that she was truly happy and loved her daughter with all of her heart. A brief talk with Judicium brings to light that her mother wished for Starlight to inherit the Rainbow Beauty Salon but chose to support the dream of her child to become a teacher. The pony feels ashamed for not realising this but Judicium reminds her that she doesn’t need to be ashamed of that and her mother loved her just as much as Star-Maker once loved Star-Catcher.

Now the prosecutor presents the next evidence and shows all the stallions that vanished. Starlight sees all the boyfriends and husbands of her friends becoming mares and losing their original personality completely. There were no stallions in the utopia wished for by Starlight. Then Pandemonium Atë (the Greek goddess of mischief, delusion, and folly) Typhon is called to reveal the wishes of Starlight. Now the pony panics because she already knows what is going to come: A world that is beautiful, happy, free of conflict and without stallions. The prosecutor points out that she took the loved ones of countless mares as well as the chance for future romances and love. Starlight is absolutely crushed by the realisation and begins to cry. Because she stood in the epicentre of the spell her wish overrode many others who hoped for love and stallions. The males can be happy that they were merely changed into mares and not completely erased from existence. She never wanted this to happen and as the prosecutor asks her, she takes responsibility and says that she is sorry. Amusingly Pandora offers a hug but is dismissed instead. Apparently Cadence isn’t the only huggy person. The Alicorn Starlight is slightly annoyed but she is far from beaten yet. Then the prosecutor calls many mares from the utopia as witnesses and Starlight is barely able to tell them apart and they all give the same answers. Then they revisit the utopia and Starlight is forced to realise that her friends, the persons she knew so well and loved so much, became these ponies that are practically identical. Wishes for equality and no conflict could only lead to most personalities becoming alike. Without conflict, there is no individuality. Individuals will always have conflict and discord, both small and big, but how it will end is open. They can loose themselves in their differences like the tribes of the Dark Age or they can embrace the differences and be able to form a circle that is able to even out each others flaws like the heroes who healed Nightmare Moon and Nightmare Whisper and defeated Discord.

The pony is shocked how she could overlook such a flaw. Afterwards it is very obvious but how could she see such a thing when she was about to give the world everlasting peace? The Alicorn Starlight gives another epic objection and points out that an entire team of scientists missed this fact as well, so it would be unfair to blame this only on Starlight herself. The prosecutor points out this implies to blame it only on Bright Eyes and her team, Starlight should share the responsibility for the details on the spell. The pony is not sure how to answer this and overrules the objection to buy herself more time. Then the defence calls several ponies from the perfect world that are different from the others in one way or another like Minty, Kimono, Rainbow Dash and Wysteria. Alicorn Starlight claims that every pony was an individual in the utopia but the prosecutor adds that these ponies are the exception and not the rule. Starlight is still depressed by the fact that the spell rewrote the personalities of her friends. So the defence needs something better to convince her and calls Destruction Shiva (a Hindu deity of destruction and very famous from the Final Fantasy Series) Typhon. Apparently Destruction is still recovering from the last act of destruction and has an ice pack to his head. Before he can accidently reveal the real identity of the defence he is silenced and is ordered to reveal his role in the act. He was the one who caused the different flow of events and made sure that the paradise wasn’t created.

Starlight is exited to learn this, since it means that the one reason the spell failed like this was that Destruction interfered. But somehow the pony isn’t happy. She knows that this doesn’t change the other things she had done or would have done. The prosecutor then goes into more details and wants to know how Destruction did it. It turns out that all he had to do was to let all the conflicting wishes happen at once, maybe by destroying the part of the spell that would have let them overlap. Judicium explains helpfully that the bomb was already placed in form of a spell that was in itself contradictionary. And Destruction was the lesser evil, if the spell would have continued, its internal conflicting dreams would have ripped apart the entire universe and killed every single being in it. Starlight is completely broken by the revelation. She realises that she should have seen it coming that the individual dreams were too different to be realised at once. In her quest to create a perfect world she was blind to this truth. The spell would have kept rewriting reality until reality itself would collapse. The prosecutor points out that Starlight isn’t completely responsible but she has to accept responsibility for the role she played. The concept of splitting up responsibly and maybe being only partially responsible for everything that happened and might have happened is almost too much for Starlight’s mortal mind. She begins to wish that it could just be over and this spark of nihilism begins to catch some attention of the mare in the background.

The decision is near. The defence calls for Bon-Bon and she says that she misses her friend and doesn’t blame her for the spell. The prosecutor is also able to reveal that while she thinks that Starlight is partly responsible for what happened (including the death of her sister and her having to raise her niece), she forgives her friend for that. No further questions are asked and the defence seems to be angry about this turn of events. At the same time Starlight wonders why the prosecutor brought forgiveness into the conversation. Patch is brought in by the defence next and says that she was searching everywhere for Starlight and blames herself for everything that happened. Starlight is devastated to hear this. And just like Bon-Bon Patch had to endure horrible things in the Dark Age (especially her encounter with Film Critique) and thinks that Starlight has some of the responsibility for what went wrong with the spell. But she forgives her friend. Sweetheart, Melody, Bright Eyes, and Clover also all miss her and forgive her for what happened. The Alicorn Starlight seems to get angrier and angrier as this goes on and there are no further witnesses.

But the defence has one last trick up her sleeve and talks with her defendant again. She asks if Starlight what will happen if she gets the guilty verdict and warns her about Pony Hell. Suddenly the Alicorn Starlight seems terrifying, giving another hint to “her” real identity. The pony is told that the ponies in hell have to drag the massive chariot ridden by Fear Incarnate across a desert for all eternity while listening to the screams of the other tortured and hearing the laughter of Havoc. For a moment Starlight actually experiences all of it and is now totally terrified by the experience. It is however very noteworthy that Alicorn Starlight actually never says that Starlight will go to hell for being found guilty. She implies it but those are actually different sentences. The defence tells her that something horrible will happen if she makes the wrong decision but never says what the wrong decision is. But the implication seems obvious enough, if Starlight is responsible for these events, then she would go to hell as punishment.

Now it is Starlight’s time to choose if she is guilty or innocent. Her friends think that she is at least partly responsible and she actually by now agrees with that. She knows that if Destruction hadn’t interfered, everything would have become even worse. But at the same time she is absolutely terrified of being trapped in hell and she knows she would never be able to see her friends again. She makes a decision. Even if denying her responsibility could open her the way into heaven, she would never be able to look her friends into the eye ever again. So she declares herself guilty. The Alicorn Starlight acts enraged and the prosecutor asks if the client should be forgiven. She doesn’t think that she deserves it but can’t deny the forgiveness of her friends. So the prosecutor forgives her as well. The defence seems enraged a bit before the being ends this act and reveals himself as Havoc. He surely had his fun with this event. The prosecutor shows his true colors as the Father of All Alicorns as well. Meanwhile the mare in the background is merely annoyed. Being so close to the Father of Alicorns comforts Starlight as Havoc and Entropy (formerly known as the mare in the background) are nearby, the fact that the Father of All Alicorns blocks the view on the two greater concepts also helps. Entropy is of course less then thrilled about the entire event but considering what she thinks is funny, there are few things that actually entertain her. Apparently Havoc was able to talk her into this with the promise of Starlight giving up all hope. Now Entropy is unwilling to admit that and erases Havoc from existence instead. But something so minor like being erased from existence can not hold back the Sum Of All Fears for long so he just invites his wife over to his domain to welcome Film Critique to hell. Havoc had her when he talked about soul-crushing despair. Their relationship seems to have a healthy foundation

Now that they are gone, Starlight is told that she will move on to Pony Heaven. The fact that she admitted her responsibility saved her soul. Havoc told her that something horrible will happen if she makes the wrong decision and the wrong decision would have been to claim to be totally innocent. Only after Starlight admitted that she was wrong, was she able to understand it and embrace the forgiveness that was offered to her. She of course does not understand who the three where, so the Father of All Alicorns explains them to her. The Hierophant was trying to save her soul while everything was just a game for Havoc. But the Perfect Existence makes clear that Havoc while having a pretty much alien moral sense does provide the survival instinct to save mortal lives and takes pride in it whenever that happens. Havoc does care for his family and children, which made it much more difficult for him when Entropy erased one of them. To Entropy nothing is of any value, not even her own family. And eventually she will erase the entire universe to make space for a new one. The Fifth Concept is the total opposite, he does truly love all living beings equally, a feeling of love that goes so far that no mortal would be able to feel it. Havoc simply got angry in the end because it was part of the act and considering that most of the previous act seemed to belong to the Phoenix Wright School Of Awesome Law And Objections, it had to end with an epic breakdown. Starlight could move on right now but asks the Father of All Alicorns to let her wait and greet her friends personally here. They all missed her so much. The Perfect Existence allows Mortis this decision and the Alicorn is just busy bringing Squire to the afterlife. The Alicorn of Death accepts this noble decision. Eventually Starlight is allowed to wait in a copy of her old office where she can see the actions of her friends.

But not only that, it also allows her to see the life that could have been, if the spell would have been successful. She sees Minty, Sweetberry, Bon-Bon and Pinkie Pie enjoying their time. They are so innocently happy that Starlight is unable to understand it and suspects that it must be an in-joke. Maybe it even is one. They also talk about Star Catcher and clearly care about her. Starlight is curious about Star-Maker and is able to see the pegasus enjoying the time with her child. She cries with happiness when she sees the child she never had. Not only that but she is able to follow the lives of her friends and enjoys it with them. In the end she patiently waits for every single one of them.

Twilight wonders if she is Clover and Minty but Luna reminds her that while she carries their hearts, that doesn’t make her the same person. She is still herself. Pinkie Pie is slightly confused about her past and even going through the Author's notes didn’t help her. Luna says that the remaining four stories might hold the answer and Pinkie Pie hopes that the other authors will be able to finish their chapters before the dramatic finish of the Dark World… I mean she hopes that they won’t need such a long time to read the remaining chapters. The tales of Sweetheart, Melody, Bright Eyes and Clover are still left. Good luck to their writers. This group may have grown apart as they became older but their friendship didn’t die. Luna understands this very well, she was also saved from her own darkness by the light of friendship.

Overall this was a great chapter that entered around a battle for the very soul of Starlight. Despite her pure intentions, her actions had horrible consequences. That made her soul so difficult to judge. To be able to accept and embrace the forgiveness, she had to understand and accept responsibility. That is one of the facts about redemption, it can happen in many ways and it can happen without the person realising that he or she are achieving it. But it can never happen without facing and understanding the mistakes of the past.

Starlight was a good person at heart and wanted the best for her friends and the world but at the same time her pride clearly played a role as well. That might be one of the reasons why Havoc took this form of a Alicorn Starlight to “defend” her. I wonder if this would have been the duty of Morning Star if he wouldn’t have abandoned his position and was killed/mostly killed in the war of the immortals. After all Moring Star represented pride like nobody else.

At the same time the chapter also shows a lot about Havoc’s personality and rather strange sense of humor. And considering that this is coming from the concept that created Ornithophobia, Ablutophobia, Bromidrophobia, Coulrophobia and Metrophobia this shouldn’t be much of a surprise.
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From the shadow who watches:......................(The silence lasts for 1 whole minute, before I start speaking)

When I first read Patch's story, I said to myself, “Man, the writer has set the bar WAY too high now. There’s no way they’d ever manage to top this." And then Starlight’s second half came along. Despite the first half creating a compelling and complex character with several bits of humor, it didn't feel quite as strong as it’s earlier brethren. But this half? It’s probably the best part of the Ponypocalypse stories since Patch went on that dragon fight and ran from Grogar. And in some ways, it shows that no author can be unbiased when it comes to writing about the supernatural. (more on that later)

That said, we start after disaster, where all around is doom and destruction. Literally in one case, as Starlight was witness to Destruction waking up. And it’s at this point that we get a visit from one of the most recurring of the gods aside from the regulars: Mortis Thanatos Charon, lord of death, the ferryman, and the person to push the souls onward.

Actually, now that I think about it, this means that The Father and Fauna Luster actually allow for a bit for flexibility in their kids names. The draconequi are all connected by their family name typhon (aside maybe from entropy), so in a way, they’re all connected by last name. the alicorns on the other hand allow for a great deal of flexibility in how the kids choose their names: they may be blood, but they’re also free to choose their path even if they have to face consequences for breaking pantheon laws.

The lord of death gets an understandably big reaction out of the fallen pony, but the reaction doesn't hold long, because another family member was also reaping the souls of this catastrophe: Misty. Pensilis had seen her self sacrifice, and thus had come to bring her up since she had already shown her love and thus her case would be a different one. And since it was so far away, Starlight knew, starlight KNEW that she was truly no more. And thus, with all the powers of death, Mortis sent her on her way to the next stage of her journey.

You see, such a catastrophe as the destruction of an entire civilization is nothing to sneeze at. And the fact of the matter is that we don’t know whether starlight can really achieve pony heaven with that on her record. And thus, she proceeded to the next stage of her afterlife: The Trial.

You see, Starlight lacked certainty to herself. Then again, this could also be standard procedure for all souls. And since time works differently outside the mortal realm, prosecution and defense could be holding an infinite number of cases at once, and be there all at once as well. It’s all very metaphysical.

The adviser is Judicium: The judge of balance, judgment and fair say. And in perhaps one of the most interesting choices, Judicium is only there to help hold witnesses accountable, and to explain the workings of the court. This goes back to the old joke/adage that even if we don’t believe in higher powers or divine law, we might just be judged by our own judging statements that we all make (like that we shouldn't go to war at all), and that we then must eat our own words when we inevitably fall short of our own views. Also, I liked the idea that judicium spoke in a voice that clearly cares about the accused, but will still hold her to the the rule of court. Empathetic, but impartial.

Anyhow, so in a way, the defense and prosecution are perfect representations of the 2 different ways we can think of how we are to be thought of in life or when we die.

For the “defense”, we have ourselves at our most glorious. Pride, honor, glory, vanity and a heightened view of oneself that we would even consider ourselves a god of our lives. An alicorn alongside others. And ultimately, a big show, as the defense seemed more like an actor than a REAL lawyer.

The prosecution on the other hand is a sign of simplicity and humility: A child of 7 or 8. Old enough to understand some right and wrong, but young enough to still be accountable to something bigger than ourselves. Wisdom but humility. Truth, but with some innocence. a primeval time, but also of big transitions. We don’t hide behind pretenses: we just come as the child we are, and seek what may come.

And so the trial began. It started with the defendant, and it moved on from there. So, let’s take a look at the evidence and testimony, shall we?

So the defendant gave the important information that she did not come up with the project, and sought to check for mistakes. However, the claim of total innocence was thrown into doubt by the testimony that she knew about there being risks. The knowledge of risks means there’s a chance for wrong. If she knew the risks, why continue with the project?

The second testimony could be seen as misdirection by the defense on account of it being a mostly positive affair. Even the prosecution’s cross examination indicates that the presence of the blue shard was in part the will of Starlight that moved it forward. Though it’s also at this time that we get foreshadowing into the true identities of defense and prosecution: the defense tells this pony who we KNOW from Patch’s story that they’ll be seeing each other again, and the prosecution just looks sad at him.

The 3rd witness is a very damning work on the second testimony, in part because it exposes it for the surface trite that it was. In a way, it is a rather somber bit. Defense worked well in an objection, which ended up being carried, although I always thought objections were for misconduct in court, not for in testimonial problems. Hmmm, odd.

Actually, that bit with “stalling the witness” was rather cold stuff. Not in the bad sense necessarily, but in that since they are outside of the realm of beings, Violet must return to a bad situation. And in a special twist, it’s actually the defense that mentions that violet must return to where she came from. Actually, I think I know what prosecution said to her before she left. “Don’t despair. A rescuer will come for you.”

There was a slew of witnesses who had their lives ruined by the explosion, which serves as good news for prosecution, but not very convincing for Ms. Starlight. Then came the testimony of Twilight I. Her testimony is intensely personal, because it’s about how they’d be erased from existence for G3, but that they were willing to go through with it so that there’d be no more monsters to fight also. A pretty handy point for Defense.

Then came the hard evidence. Specifically, the tale of Star Maker. Alluded to in Celestia’s tale, we now know who Starlight G3’d into, and she experienced the curiosity of her past self, and the knowledge that absolute love for one’s child is greater than all the pleasures of life for eternity. and so she died. But, it was a life of joy and happiness. It was a utopia of sorts. Of course, it’s also here that we see the court runner in the back, who had to present the evidence from her storage locker. Again, the foreshadowing.

Judicium also got a nice nod in for Starlight’s family life, and how her mother did love her, and wanted the best for her.

While prosecution won’t dispute the greatness of the utopia, he then presented exhibit B: the unfortunate side-effect of the move was that by her inner wish that Ms. Pandemonium “Pandora, Desire” Ate Typhon saw, all stallions were eradicated by becoming mares. After all, she was closer to where the wish was strongest, and thus got first say. It was a hard pill to swallow. But, perhaps a good prelude for later, as she was sorry that it happened. We even get a sweet moment from Pandora, who wanted to give her the comfort of imagination to move forward.

Then there was the bit on the eradication of individuality in G3, with all her old friends made somewhat generic. (which, to be fair, was mostly true, although at Twilight, they did change a bit, especially the pony Patch turned into.)

To counter, Defense brought up a sampling of the G3’ers that did have some neat quirks that made them unique: The Darling Rainbow Dash, Kimono, Minty, Wysteria, Princess Rarity, Master Kembroth Heathspike, and so on. Yet these were few and far between, and thus not total evidence.

Actually, at this point in the trial, it was more a referendum on whether G3 was a good world that Starlight created. However, given that defense had not produced convincing arguments, he was forced to bring the act in question back to the front with the calling of Destruction.

Destruction at first could be the dead ringer witness for the defense, but ended up being a dead giveaway for Starlight’s importance in the shared guilt for the project: All he did was blow up a spell that had contradictions waiting to happen. It was very convicting to the judge.

Then came the final testimonies. The testimonies of her friends. Starting with Bon Bon, who admitted that since she was on the project, she bore some responsibility, but that she forgives her for it. The same went for the daring warrior Patch who told of how she was bringing the rainbow shards back together (and presumably was called from after the defeat of film critique) and how things changed, and that starlight was responsible in some way, but that she was forgiven due to the unforeseen consequence. And so did all the other ponies whose chapters haven’t been written yet. Responsible, but forgiven. It got very confusing for the judge.

At the very end, Defense tried one more tactic: showing her what Pony Hell was like. Eternal running, alone, with heat and cold all around in extremes. Chilling, and frightening.

And ultimately, it’s at this final stage, that starlight had to choose between truth and fear. She had been shown enough evidence to see that she was responsible in some way, but her main reservation was that she didn't want to go to pony hell. However, like AJ of a time later on, the truth also brings on a big responsibility. To say she’s fully innocent is almost a naive and childish thing to say. And thus in her verdict, “..I find the defendant...Starlight...guilty..."

And then came the big surprise:”"Do you feel Starlight should be forgiven?" She had given the verdict, but now the prosecution would provide the sentence. And as Starlight accepted the gift of forgiveness, the prosecution in turn told her “You are forgiven.”

Then the truth came out. The prosecution was in fact The Father of All Alicorns. Defense was Havoc, and the court observer was Entropy. Actually, does this mean that The Father has a nickname of Buddy? Or is that just a Havoc sort of thing to say?

Case Dismissed.

Actually, all things aside, I actually did find that trial fun, even if it was for a pony’s soul. And the argument between havoc and entropy was pretty amusing as well. Fear and nothingness arguing over fun stuff to do. It did bring a little chuckle despite the darker ramifications, especially since it’s revealed that husband and wife have been more strained ever since Entropy killed their eldest son.

And it’s right about here that I’d like to comment that this is a truly Christian way to look at the POV afterlife. If the forgiveness part wasn’t obvious enough, the fact of the matter is that there is no amount of intent and goodness alone can get a pony in. They must admit that they are responsible for the wrongs that have been committed, and only then, when seeking the forgiveness, may they truly get admittance. It’s what sets apart Christianity from SO many other traditions. Not bad, just unconventional in the “traditional” view of the afterlife.

Also, the way Havoc was justified was pretty neat, in that he likes it when fear saves lives. (in a sarcastic voice) Well then, I suppose that he finds things like seat belts to be just the most darling things, since they wear them out of fear of a crash. (You Make A Mockery Of Fear?) (No lord Havoc, just having fun with other shadows.)

Actually, is the child who cannot control his impulses Destruction or Discord?

And for one flickering instant, Starlight knew what it was like to know that existence itself loved her. It made her feel joyous, free, full of love. But, remembering what happened by her hands, she asked to have a stay of sentencing, if only to greet her friends as they enter the afterlife. And as we saw with Patch, she stayed to the very end in order to see her circle home.

So Mortis gave her a resting zone, and while waiting, she watched. she watched her daughter in the lost timeline stay happy. She watched her friends grow and struggle in the new world of apocalypse. And when their time finally ended, she was there to welcome them in.

Twilight meanwhile found parallels between her and clover. Namely, that Clover changed into Minty in the transition, and minty’s light was then placed into Twilight. But even if she had bits of both in her, they are NOT her. In some ways, Pinkie is a great mystery. Her G4 self is G3 pinkie mixed with princess rarity and surprise, but what was her G3 template based in?

And after a brief meditation that friendship lasts after friends go their separate way if they maintain it, it was time to move on to 4 more ponies. And hopefully before the dark world and shining armor runs into too much trouble.

Let’s hope so. After the last 2 chapters, they have a high bar to meet. This chapter rocked. Totally rocked! From trial to themes, it rocked like a star. Totally cool.
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PrincessSpike Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014
The changing form thing a kind of lie Dr. Who, the courtroom thing is like Phoenix Wright, the explosion thing is like Double Rainboom, geez, there are a lot of references in this thing!   
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014
Yeah, and yet no one bothers to update the shout out page for no reason. I hope you liked this baby. 
PrincessSpike Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014
Dunno why, but this reminds me SO much of the Warriors series. 
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014
What was the warrior series? 
KurseofKings Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013
"The Father of Alicorns looked to the pony, a smile on His face." How does he do that without a face? What, do the stars on/in his head just form a constellation shaped like a smiley face?
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013
I imagine it's the same way Marvel's Eternity has a face, or if you want to create a more proper image, imagine his 'surface' looking like polished glass that create the shape of a face. Either/or. 
KurseofKings Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013
"To Me, All Things Have Value. No Life Is Without Meaning. To Me, You Are No Less Important To Me Than My Own Children. I Love You, Starlight, As I Do All Life." ...So he's just a male version of Fauna Luster then?
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013
'Just?' Naw. 

He compliments Fauna Luster the way Havoc compliments Entropy (but without the antagonism.) 
KurseofKings Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013
No offense, but I barely see it.
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013
How would you show it differently?
KurseofKings Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013
I would have him act completely different than Fauna Luster. You know, have him be his own person rather than someone who feels the exact same way Fauna Luster does? I would also rephrase the paragraph that made me think that he was just a male version of Fauna Luster.
KurseofKings Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013
"I believed was just...I knew he wouldn't lie to me..." Yeah... About that, Starlight (and this may seem like a totally radical concept) just because somebody really, truly, believes that something is true doesn't mean that it automatically is. (like I said, totally radical concept)
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013
Indeed. 100% correct.

Just when an Elder says something, it has a habit of being reality. 
KurseofKings Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013

"To Havoc, Nothing Is Serious, Everything Is A Game. Do Not Take This As Him Being Uncaring, He Does Have A Form Of Compassion Towards Ponies, It Is He That Provides The Survival Instinct, He Takes Joy When Fear Saves Lives. But His Morality Is So Alien Compared To Yours And Mine That To Attempt To Describe It In Terms You Could Understand Is Impossible."

"He's a psychopath." I say.

"No." He says simply. "You Are Thinkings In Terms Of Psychosis And Psychology. His Morals Are No Less Real Than Yours." ...No, he's definitely a psychopath. And evil. And a jerk. And if you ask me, kind of stupid and incompetent. And too crazy to be in charge. Seriously, Shishio would make a better leader than him(and now that I think about it, Entropy)! And you still do a terrible horrible no good very bad job at/with convincing us (especially me) that all members of the draconequi aren't evil incarnate!
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013
The crazy thing is that I was worried that I was making them all "poor and misunderstood teddy bears". 
KurseofKings Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013
"His Colleague, The Bored One, Was His Wife Entropy, The Embodiment Of All That Will Cease, Queen Of Oblivion, Empress Of Not, Nothingness, Anti-Mother Of All Things." You forgot "really big jerk."
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013
You saying that over and over again just makes it agitation. 
KurseofKings Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013
Your 'Defense' was Havoc, Mass Hysteria And Fear Incarnate, The King of Fears, Emperor of Terror, Father Of All Fears, Forger Of The Survival Instinct, The Resting Place Of Lost Souls. You forgot "big jerk."
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013
Tell me. How WOULD YOU have written him to show him as Orange and Blue MOrality, instead of showing him as Good or Bad? (opposed to simply what'd you change to show him as "not a jerk"). I'm seriously asking please. If you have ideas of how Blue and Orange morality should be, I'm all ears. 
KurseofKings Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013
(So tempting to say "make him more like Pandora/see Pandora") You can still act good and clearly have Blue And Orange Morality. There's Gon from Hunter X Hunter, Kirby from the Kirby games, Akuma  from Street Fighter and Conjure from Rise of the Dark Age. And I'm positive that there are more examples out there, see the TVTropes page for more examples. But if that isn't enough, then just do what I'd do: Give him more appearances and actually show him committing genuinely good acts for genuinely good reasons. And I don't mean "make him act like a good father" or "have him show off his hidden heart of gold." An example? Have him make a big mistake, show him admit fault for it and actively have him try to fix it (by himself or through his children) and before you say anything sending Rancor to get Destruction's power back did not count. He could have done that at any time and if he did do it for Discord and only for Discord you did a very poor job of showing it.
KurseofKings Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013
"'The Fifth Concept'," What are concepts one through four?
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013
0 or 1 The Fool.
The Magician. 
The Hierophant (Father of Alicorn's Tarot). 
KurseofKings Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013
That was six, but OK.
KurseofKings Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013
"Well, Buddy, That Was The Most Fun I've Had In A Very Long Time, We Should Do This Again Sometime!" ...Did Havoc forget to un-erease his brain from existence?!? He seems a bit dense.
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013
He had fun. Why wouldn't he express a desire to do something similar? 
KurseofKings Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013
"I call Destruction Shiva Typhon to the stands!" Shiva?! But... But that's a girl's name! ...What do mean I play to much Final Fantasy?
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013
Er. Yeah. You do. 
KurseofKings Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013
...You do realize that that was a joke, right?
KurseofKings Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013

"Would you like a hug?" Pandemonium asked me.

"You're dismissed!" I snap, and Judicium sent her away." Who in their right minds wouldn't accept a hug from Pandemonium? She's Pandemonium!

alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013
Starlight wasn't really in the mood to accept a hug from her. And if Pandora was evil, then every fantasy people ever had would be evil. 
KurseofKings Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013
"The defense then called several other ponies from the utopia world...I got names, but I couldn't really tell who was who...they all seemed so alike." Why did you underline "alike?"
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013
Because it's creepy to Starlight to have so many ponies be so identical. 
KurseofKings Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013
"That... makes horrible SENSE..." Discord: And that's why there's no fun in making it!
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013
No comment. 
KurseofKings Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013
That was a joke too.
KurseofKings Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013
"The defense attorney cleared her throat at the strange mare, who then gave an annoyed sigh.

Suddenly, I saw an entire world came rushing into my head!" Entropy did all that just by sighing? Wow, the elders really are powerful!

alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013
Uh. No. The sigh itself had nothing to do with. 
Persona22 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013
You know what I loved about this chapter? The Draconnequs!
I love those guys! Like Anarchy said: I just don't understand the Alicorns. But the Draconnequi, I completely understand them. Even when they make no sense!
Even Destruction, the most one dimensional and unninteresting of them has something that just draws my attention.
Entropy... I mean, she must hate even herslef! I mean, she embodies not-existing. But the fact that SHE exists, kind of negates her whole idea. And that's the BEAUTY of the Draconnqui, they contradict their very selves, and they don't give a damn about it. Unlike the Alicorns, that is all one lined-follow the rules of the universe-stuff, the Draconnecus just know that "shit happens" and they ARE "the shit" and know it.
Discord is so far the one that shows more of those contradictions (but I also have to admit that I'm still not sure what he's supposed to represent here, even if its clear in the show what he is supposed to be: Chaos and Disharmony. This story's Discord seems to hate the whole Spirit of Chaos thing, but what exactly is "Disharmony" anyway?) Discord is supposed to hate rules, but he follows rules set by himself. He makes sense and is supposed to NOT make sense (the whole speech she gave to Diamond Tiara is a perfect example of Discord's perfect anti-logic that makes sense in its own twisted way).
Pandora, well she's just amazing (and I kind of think she must work together with Anarchy most of the time he's doing his "job". I mean, you can't have a revolution or change of Status Quo unless you first Imagine what you want to strive for). The embodiment of Imagination? She's the reason Unicorns come up with new spells, she's the one that makes the Author of Daring Do come up with the stories Rainbow Dash loves so much. What is there NOT to love about her!
Anarchy (one of my personal favorites along with Pandora), seems to both hate and love his "gig" on the one side, revolutions happen, but afterwards come a sense of order. It is impossible to have a constant revolution, but if he could he would, but he can't and accepts it.
Strife I like, but I would like to see more of her because her personality doesn't show that much. But what I like most about her is how she likes to see what is going to turn out of her little "experiments" she has no freaking idea what will happen fish suddenly need to breath air in the surface, and she is just as surprised as anyone else when the fish turned to amphibians.

One question about them. If Discord killed Destruction (he DID kill him, right? What he did was not just take his power, Destruction is gone, right?) Does that mean that the very concept of things getting destroyed no longer exists? I mean, how does that work?
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013
Discord ATE Destruction. So his concept wasnt' destroyed. It was assimilated by DIscord. 
Persona22 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013
So Discord is now the concept of (what is he supposed to be the concept of?) AND the concept of Destruction?
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013
Persona22 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013
So, he is both Chaos and Destruction then?
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013
I guess he is. 
Persona22 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013
Wow... bad combination... he would be going nuts in no time... wait, he did go nuts! Destruction needed to blow things up or else go to a feral state, and Discord hates rules so much he hates the fact that he has to make Chaos because its his "job", and now his job is to destroy things as well? While making things chaotic? His chaos will only end in absolute destruction! No wonder he is the way he is now. Before he was random and kind of cruel, now his randomness has a purpose, which is to have things destroyed, and his cruelty will become completely vicious! And that is not even considering the influence that Havoc's avatar would have on him...
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013
Believe me when I say, Discord was a monster and a sicko long before this. 
yoshiegg64 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013
Loved the clever set-up for the of trial. Also loved seeing some of the other alicorns and draconequus do their jobs. Especially Destruction. Poor guy, we havn't heard from him since he was eaten.
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013
"Poor guy, we havn't heard from him since he was eaten."

That's what generally happens after you're eaten.

"Loved the clever set-up for the of trial. Also loved seeing some of the other alicorns and draconequus do their jobs. "

Thanks Kendell2 for that one. It was his idea.

Happy that you've managed to enjoy things.
yoshiegg64 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013
That's what generally happens after you're eaten.

How very true. By the way was that a Phoenix Wright reference I spy? Possibly reference to the 'My little Turnabout storm series' on youtube?
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013
Yes it was a reference.
Kendell2 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013
Looking back at this, I will say one thing I'm proud of about it; that we all managed to make the Trial in the Spirit World a complete Mind Screw, even with the explanations, it's hard to tell how a lot of things work in it.

I'm glad because it's one of the few things that really show how impossible it is for a mortal to understand the spirit world.
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