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"Twins?" Pinkie Pie gasped.

Celestia's eyes widened at what she sensed, something only she could sense. 'They...they feel the same...but...that's impossible...'

The bride stood with her mouth hanging open. Her right eye twitched.

"This time. Bucked up. From low.
Because of a random nothing? NOO!"

A ball of green magic condensed into raw force fired from the bride's horn, aimed at either the dirty Cadence or Blueblood, none could tell, but the white unicorn mare summoned a shield spell that shattered on impact sending the mare out of the wedding hall so hard she bounced and skidded on the royal carpet.

Blueblood went to the downed mare's side, she was breathing, but not much else, he hoped he imagined the cracks in her horn.

Everypony's eyes were now on the bride who couldn't brush off what she had used as a harmless stun spell.

The dirty Cadence put herself between the bride and the couple then shouted. "She's a changeling. She takes the form of somepony you love and gains power by feeding off your love for them."

The bride's breath came in haggard gasps, her entire body shook with fury of a wild bull, her eyes were like an enraged beast's. A pillar of green fire exploded from her, the image of the bride Princess Cadenza slid away, the wedding dress burning off her.

When the flame cleared the mare could have been a black Alicorn, if you were blindingly drunk on salt. She had green dragon eyes and fangs. Her dragonfly-like wings, legs, blue mane, and horn all had holes like they were moth eaten, or decaying. Nopony could tell if the green on her back and wrapping on her stomach were regalia or a part of her body. A black crown with blue jewels similarly could either be a part of her or an ordainment.

'Rosedust, they're alive,' Princess Celestia thought.

Nearly all present gasped in horror at the sight.

"Not a changeling you brat! The Queen Of All Changelings! I. AM. CHRYSALIS! And you still being here changes nothing Cadence! My duty is to find my subjects food, and Equestria has more love than any other! And it all belongs to us."

"Not going to happen! Shining Armor's protection spell will keep your changelings from ever even reaching us!" Princess Cadence snapped.

Queen Chrysalis chuckled. "Oh little princess, what made you think my army was outside Canterlot?"

Cadence's eyes widened. "No," she whispered.

"This wedding was their signal to begin! I thank everypony here for cooperating with 'your' local royal guards! And the only reason I'm saying any of this, is because I already know there is nothing you can do about it."

"WANNA BET?!" Rainbow Dash snarled readying to cold start a Sonic-Rainboom to the changeling's face, but got dragged down by a familiar tail bite by, "AJ! Not now! You heard the big bug!"

"Yeah Ah heard Her Madjesty, it's hopeless," Applejack said matter of fact.

"The Tartarus?! AJ!" RD didn't believe what she just heard. "Come on! We can't just stand here! Pure Evil Ten O'clock!"

"There's no such thing as 'pure evil' Dashie, Princess Luna, Fluttershy, Trixie, were all still good inside, even super-mega-nasty-awful Discord had a fun side," Pinkie Pie pointed out.

"Fun does not equal good!"

"K'. But the point is Dashie, she said love is food for her, but love grows when ya share it right? So she just can see sharing is better for her bug-ponies than this whole invasion non-sense. If she lives off love, she must have a heart right? After all, the Paradise Ponies convinced total nasties to be nice a lot. We should do the same before the nasty fighting even starts! That's the pony way!"

"BLAGH! I can't stand another word of your tripe!
You are hunting Snipe!
I am not part of your naive 'bad and good!'
The hungry beast is all that's under the hood!"
Chrysalis hissed forgetting herself.

"That's not true! See?!" Pinkie Pie pulled a small cloud from nowhere despite not being a Pegasus with the view inside only visible to the Elements and Chrysalis. Pinkie Pie's jaw dropped, when she saw in the cloud a grave etched with a little wing and halo so badly desecrated she could not read the name, and dancing around it was an image the of the changeling queen in a devil costume,
"I am savage wild and free!"
Not bound by moral am me!"

The cloud fell away like a felt drawing. Pinkie Pie cried out in horror. "You-you're like a monster from the Everfree! You're WORSE than a monster from Everfree!"

Chrysalis rolled her eyes, "Finally a cattle gets it."

Rarity for her part was transfixed by the hope they could subdue this invader without violence (and through her, her army) and the combined disgust at this monster stealing an innocent mare's wedding day from her, playing them all like pawns, and destroying the wedding dress Rarity had made, that dress had been a gift, and now would never be worn by its rightful owner.

Fluttershy was snapped out of her own spine freezing fear at this pony-seeming horror by the wild panic of her song birds, they were terrified of the fake bride now that she had shed her mask. The poor things freaked out, wanting in fly in every direction. None but Fluttershy gave the poor creatures a moment's thought. Her animals were her family, she had a responsibility towards them. She desperately soothed and calmed them down least they catch the ire of this thing shaped like a pony but was not a pony. Fluttercruel felt an unearthly sensation of wrongness and familiarity from the monster.

The CMC hugged each other, it was almost the advent of Nightmare Moon all over again, but this wasn't the boogymare from Nightmare Night, this had been the princess who had been so nice to them! And hadn't even been the princess at all. They didn't notice Sweetie Belle was just smiling. Silver Tongue put his forelegs around his daughter, his eyes narrowed at the unknown danger, his heart beating like a drum.

"Hey, Shining. Time to be the brave knight and rescue the princess from the wicked witch," Banjo whispered.

"It's fine. Everything is going fine now."

"Shining, I know you almost married the queen of ugly but don't conk-out now!" Caramel prodded.

"Cadence will forgive you, just help her already dummy!" Cherry Coke implored.

"If you don't wanna I can give it a crack," Note Worthy baited.

"All of you stay exactly where you are. That is an order," Shining Armor said in a monotone not even looking at them.

"What?!" Banjo gasped.

"Are you questioning my orders soldier?"

"No offense Shining but if Cadence never needed protecting, now would be-" Shining Armor bucked Banjo's leg so hard it broke. He collapsed in blinding pain.

"Shin' have you gone nuts?!" Note Worthy gasped getting close to his friend.

"I said stay still, that's an order," SA's voice couldn't have been more emotionless.

Princess Celestia took one look at Shining Armor and ordered. "Spike get a warning out to all royal guards and my sister! The guard has been infiltrated!"

"I can't do that, sorry," Spike said.

"Spike! Now is not the time to be timid!" Rarity heard herself shout.

"I'm sorry. Her Majesty doesn't want me to."

"Spike what do you mean I don't want you to!" Princess Celestia gasped.

"My minion isn't talking about you your highness," Chrysalis said warmly.

Rarity gracefully forgot herself, elegantly charged at the baby dragon in her lovely dress, and beautifully struck the dragon in the face. "Impostor! Where is Spike?"

The queen of hunger rolled her eyes. "Pst. Your ponies are beyond stupid. You cling to the answer that's the most comfortable. That is the real Spike."

"You're lying!"

The Queen spoke in a copy of Cadence's voice, "Oh Rarity, don't you understand? If I was lying you'd never suspect I was. I am an actress."

"Rarity, I'm sorry. It's what Her Majesty wants," Spike whimpered. Rarity looked at Spike and herself in horror.

"How could we be such fools?!" Rarity lamented.

Chrysalis rolled her eyes. "It's your nature. BUT STOP selling yourselves, and me so short!" She spoke in Cadence's voice again. "I've fooled many, many ponies besides you lot, I once tricked a loving couple into thinking I was their son. So don't be so arrogant as to think you are wiser or more perceptive than all of them. I spent forever making sure the left and right hooves were too busy to think and weren't able to compare notes! I spent decades planning for this moment! If you were stupid, I'd have invaded years ago instead of slowly getting my troops in position to begin this invasion! If you were stupid I'd not even have NEEDED to launch an invasion! That's where me and that pompous, over inflated manchild of a chaos spirit differ! I didn't assume you couldn't beat me! I knew you could and that's why now I'm standing tall! I am an actress, the best!"

Cadence made a beeline straight for Shining Armor. Chrysalis stomped into her path.

"Don't even try little princess. Or do you want a one way trip back to a hole in the ground with no exit?"

Cadence gritted her teeth as she felt one of her legs shake. "Your Shining Armor belongs to me now. And he won't be doing much as your husband OR Captain of the Royal Guard now. Isn't that right?"

"Yes, My Love." Shining Armor gasped out dimly.

By now the assembled ponies were mortified.

Celestia had had enough.

"You made a mistake by revealing yourself early impostor! SURRENDER! Shining Armor is not Equestria's only protector! Stand down or I'll protect my subjects from you myself!"

I wished I was Luna, because then I could have shot this fallen Flutterpony through the back to protect my ponies without a shred of guilt. But I wasn't gifted with her ruthlessness. And I rationalized that if she did have an army, we needed her to call them off least they try to avenge their fallen leader.

"There's no way you were once the Element of Laughter, that was a terrible joke," Chrysalis said, "Tell your ponies to submit and my changelings will be gentle."

"This is my response." A beam of golden light shot straight at the changeling queen, the temperature in the room skyrocketed in seconds, causing the ponies watching to begin sweating.

A green beam of the queen's own horn perfectly aligned with the princess' magic, the two clashing.

(Notes (Earth Pony): Teacher! Give it everything! Don't hold back!)

Queen Chrysalis' eyes widened in surprise, then alarm as she found her hooves skidding across the floor leaving trenches.

"YOUR MAJESTY!" A handful of ponies and one dragon cried out in concern and fear.


Why is she so strong?! She isn't SUPPOSED to be this strong!

(Notes (Pegasus): Picked the wrong Celestia to mess with!)

You aren't even supposed to be here!!


Princess Celestia's beam forced back the Changeling Queen into a wall and overwhelmed her, the changeling queen's body exploded in a mass of green fire.

"They always explode," Pinkie Pie said.

The charred and empty remains of the changeling queen slid down down, burned and lifeless, a broken shell that had once contained life.

Several ponies and one dragon in the room seemed to be in a state of shock.

"I am sorry," Princess Celestia sighed and lowered her head.

"You will be." Celestia's eyes shot open, the corpse got to its feet, and green flames flashed revealing an angry and alive Chrysalis with a forehead bleeding green.

Chrysalis let out a changeling war cry and unleashed another green beam, this one at much closer range and with much greater intensity. Princess Celestia, caught off guard, counterattacked, and the two beams locked again, but this time the green beam was shaped almost like a spear, or needle, and struck Princess Celestia's horn dead center. Princess Celestia cried out the attack traveled through her horn, and overwhelmed the magic centers of her brain. Her eyes rolled up in her head as she fell to her side, her legs involuntary twitching.


If...if I had given anymore, I would have burned to ashes everypony in that room before I put down Chrysalis.


"I told you, I'm an actress!" Chrysalis hissed, putting a hoof to her head and snarling at the blood she saw on it.
"What was supposed to happen, was not that.

Every Equestrian in the room felt her hearts fill with consternation. Fluttershy and Rarity's eyes filled with tears. So did Twilight's, but you wouldn't know it from her happy expression.

"I always knew Princess Celestia was weak!" Shouted a noble, nopony saw which one, or they'd have clobbered him before the changelings could.

Chrysalis groaned. Not about to have her victory lessened. "No you morons, she could have killed me. The amount of Shining Armor's love for Cadence I've taken has made me more powerful than I thought possible. I didn't think love this pure and intense existed. Then again, I had never fed on the love for a goddess before."

"I always knew Princess Celestia was incompetent!"

"Oh shut the buck up!" Chrysalis groaned and face hoofed. "Slipping through and infiltrating her information network undetected and avoiding her magical security precautions were the greatest challenges of my life. Let alone fooling her! Stop trying to belittle my accomplishments you nobility morons!"

"Everypony! Protect Celestia!" Rainbow Dash snarled before the guards could, rising up and the others got the memo to protect the beloved mother of their herd.

Only to be stopped by a line of spell blasts that strafed their path.

Twilight waved her hoof in a 'naughty-naughty' gesture. "Now now Friends, don't ruin Her Majesty's big day, remember what Spike said before you hurt him Rarity?"

Rarity blanched. "We're dead."

"Of course not!" Twilight cheered, despite the tears beginning to trickle down her cheeks. "All they want to do is eat our love! And the love between six good friends like us is sure to scrumptious!"

"TWILIGHT! Not you too!" Pinkie Pie, a horrible feeling in the pit of her stomach.

RD made a snap decision. "Sorry Twilight! But I'll bet my Sonic Rainbow is faster than your magic or ta toss yourself in my way!"

"RD ya still talk too much!" AJ snapped sounding angry, then said softly, "And ya can't do that."

RD turned to her, "AJ we don't have time to debate Celestia...could be."

= Dark Underground Rap Instrumental =

AJ's eyes shined with the Truth.

"AJ...stop, please, I can't, I don't want to." Rainbow eyes twitched as she looked upon truths she never wanted to learn. Tears began to form in her eyes.

"Her Madjesty can't have ya causing trouble now can she? Too bad she was worried that pesky Element of Loyalty might make ya resistant ta lettin' her make ya all nice and cooperative-like. Ah'm sorry. How deep inta the truth can ya go before yer brain breaks in itty-bitty pieces Ah wonder," AJ said in a callous almost cruel voice gently holding RD's muzzle, RD unable to bring herself to even closer her eyes.

Rainbow Dash's entire body was shaking, seeing every thoughtless, callous, and cruel wrong she had brought upon Derpy over the years since foalhood.

"HI-YA!" Rarity did a leaping kick to Applejack, knowing she was tough enough to take it, knocking AJ away from Rainbow and breaking the connection by force. "Pardon Applejack, but Rainbow darling looked like she could use a break from reflection." She knelt down to the Pegasus, "Darling are you alright?"

"No. I'm not," Rainbow Dash hissed in pain.


Ah'll say this about mah time under that witch's spell. Makin' meh do THAT tah Rainbow? Makin' me do the ONE thing that refusin' tah do separated meh from Nightmare Mirror? That's second on mah lists of things Ah'll never forgive that no good rotten rattlesnake for!

(Notes (Pegasus): Second?)

First is the look on Applebloom's face when she saw meh like that!

(Notes (Pegasus): Oh.)


Cadence hated the feeling of helplessness welling up inside her. She couldn't have escaped for NOTHING could she? She couldn't make things WORSE could she?! Her eyes wandered to two empty seats, looking rather out of place in the room full of standing ponies, put there as a reminder for two beloved friends she had lost before that she could do nothing about.

Chrysalis touched the bleeding area on her head with a snarl, then looked at the group. "Thank you so much for leaving my Twilight Sparkle behind in this room. Alone. If you'd bothered to stay, then I'd never have had the chance you gave me."

Pinkie Pie's eyes teared up.

Applebloom's eyes went wide with shock.

"But don't worry, you're not the only ones who made this possible," said Chrysalis, walking over to Applejack. "If your friend here had just been a little more observant, this never would have happened. Isn't that right, my little pony?"

Pinkie sunk to her knees. ""

Applejack didn't look sick, but she still seemed...unnatural, like her eyes were sad while the rest of her face said nothing. "Yes...yer madjesty. Ah coulda ruined this whole thing if Ah hadn't been worryin' about ponies' privacy. This is all because of meh."

Chrysalis grinned at the looks on the faces. "What? No 'oh, she's lying'? Oh, right, she's Miss Honesty. Oh, you don't know how hard that stubborn little mind of hers was to make lie at all. Tell them again."

"It's mah fault this happened."

Chrysalis chuckled. "That's a good little pony. And who am I?"

"You are Her Madjesty."

"And what does that make me?"

"Mah Master."

"And what are you?"

"...yer property."


I'll admit...I know exactly how Applejack must feel now about that...The baddie revealing your big mistake to the entire world, or at least to Cloudsdale. I've been there...She was there for me when I let my mistakes begin to eat me alive, just like Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy were when I went nuts. I'll be there for you AJ. That's a pegasus promise.


"" said Applebloom, trembling, tears streaming down her face.

Applejack looked at her sister. She opened her mouth to say something, but instead literally gagged on the words she was trying to say. After a few moments, she stopped...and a single tear ran down her otherwise unreadable face.

"You and your brother have done a good job Twilight Sparkle." Chrysalis, AGAIN switched to Cadence's voice just for the fun of it. "You are a pair of remarkable siblings."

"Thank you, Your Majesty," The two echoed together.

"I LOVE ponies who do a good job, but I like it more when they give me love instead." Queen Chrysalis whispered leaning close to the smiling purple unicorn. "Your brother's love tastes so good, yours is very delectable too. Let's have another little taste."

= Pure Odio Live-A-Live =

"GET AWAY FROM MY BABIES!" Starlight Sparkle hissed as she teleported right in Chrysalis' face, catching everyone in the room by surprise. She kicked and bucked at the changeling queen who dodged all of her blows not even blocking them, then Starlight grabbed a solid stone pillar with her magic and threw it high speed at the queen who deflected it with blow of her own magic. In that instant Starlight Sparkle teleported again and blasted the queen with a concentrated blast of starlight magic at point blank right in the queen's face. The flash cleared to show a tiny oozing crack on the carapace of Chrysalis face.

Chrysalis felt pain, then fury. "YOU'LL PAY FOR THAT YOU LITTLE WORM! NOW YOU SQUIRM!" All four of Starlight's legs were caught in Chrysalis' telekinesis, then TWISTED in ways Princess Gaia never intended. She cried out in pain as Chrysalis released her now with four broken legs, then abruptly caught her magically gripping one leg, causing more pain. "Leave the ad-libbing to the professionals."

She then threw Twilight's mother at high speed toward a wall, Moonlight Sparkle barely managed to catch her with his own magic to prevent her from being permanently damaged.

"Tertiary characters who exist just to embellish a character's background should just stay in the backdrop, where they belong and let the main characters play the important roles. And parents should run away to breed another day," the queen said. "I carry within me the indestructible desire to survive. What makes any of you think you can break it?!"

Neither Shining nor Twilight had even flinched.

"My foals, forgive me, for failing you," The mother said through the pain as her husband cradled her.

"Your books stink by the way, I burn every copy I find," Chrysalis verbally threw at the broken unicorn. "My one good deed for the arts."


Mom...Have I ever told you how much I hate being made to watch ponies I care about get hurt?

(Notes (Earth Pony): Yes, Shiney. We were there in the old timeline.)

Then you can imagine how I feel looking back on that...I think Twilight feels the same way...


"Seems your love and faith in your student weren't so unbreakable after all." Chrysalis leaned and whispered to Celestia.


I didn't waste breath on the fallen Flutterpony. I had little to spare.


(Notes (Pegasus): Grandma...I'VE HAD ENOUGH!)

(Notes (Unicorn): I'm sorry.)

(Notes (Earth Pony): The bad big witch hurt grandma!)

(Notes (Unicorn): I'm sorry.)

(Notes (Pegasus): Dawn! You talk with Queen Tiamat and tell her Teacher is calling in a BIG favor! I'll go to the Wonderbolts, every guard who isn't a changeling, and get Trixie's mother in Hoofington and lead her to where she can find a good teleport mage! Then you see if you can find where The Doctor's gotten to this time! He should be here in Canterlot already! And don't you dare tell us this is all still 'normal' Dusk!)

(Notes (Unicorn): I'm sorry.)

(Note: (Pegasus): This isn't how things are supposed to go! This is an emergency!)

(Note: (Unicorn): Sisters. I'm sorry. I...let my guard down. Because Her Majesty is not as powerful as Nightmare Whisper with the Elder Horn, I believed Her Majesty couldn't effect me when I interviewed her. I let her get too close, I didn't think she could be a threat. I under estimated Her Majesty.)

That does seem to be my fate. But thankfully there are some fates I can change.

(Note: (Pegasus): WHAT?! NO WAY! THERE IS NO WAY!)

(Notes (Earth Pony): You big bully!!!)


(Note: (Pegasus): Dusk, what did you do with the notes? They're writing on their own?)

(Notes (Unicorn): I'm sorry. I've failed you. This is all MY FAULT. We outside of time, divine light be sealed, down our perch we climb, naked in the mortal's field. Scattered by the wind. In mortality we're pinned.)


"Yes my queen."

It is fate it seems that I am always to be underestimated! May all recognize now, that the I, and my changelings, are NOT to be trivialized.


"Hey, you okay?"

BLECH! What a headache! This makes that punch Fluttercruel gave me seem like a love pat. Wait. Huh?

I opened my eyes, focusing on a blue pegasus stallion in a Wonderbolt's uniform. "Uuuuuuugh."

"Can you speak?"

"S-Soarin'," I gasped out.

"That's my name. Spitfire says you teleported right into our hotel room. I'd say you went to a lot of trouble for an autograph, but you look like you just went through Tartarus."

I must have influenced Dusk's spell slightly through our link and landed me somewhere safely close-by. Or I think I did.

What the buck. This is impossible. Oh no. Please no!...I felt sick, naked, and terrified all at once! Horseapples.

I curled up in a ball and began to shake. No. No. I can't be. This isn't right! This is WRONG!!!!

"Miss? Miss!" Dawn. Dusk.



I'm hurt?

This like when Mr. Discord hurt me when I tried to help Tiara.

Peewee? Thanks Super-Mommy! You're okay! Hugs! I'm so happy you're here. Where is here?

Huh? Where are my notes?...I feel funny. No, not silly Peewee, I feel, not right.

OW! I can't, I can't walk through walls? I better get back to when the wedding happens! We gotta help...huh? Why...w-why can't I walk through time? It's still here! So why can I move through it Peewee?!

This reminds me of that play where the narrator gets pulled into the story by the characters...I'm not going to be fed me to a giant am I Peewee? You're right, our friends wouldn't do something like that.

I'm still in Canterlot, all the fancy dressed adults are looking funny at me.

Everypony's looking at me! But Peewee I'm supposed to be 'as good as invisible.'

Bigger sister...big sister...I don't think I've ever felt this alone before...I'm scared Peewee....

"Excuse me little miss, are you alright?"


My name is Half-Light Dusk. I write this as I stand atop the roof of the wedding ceremony. I am branded by Her Majesty's taint. Her other slaves and her people know not to attack me even though I am no longer outside of time. I was born old. Because of the link my sisters and I share, my power was sealed when theirs was, and I was pushed into normal time when they were. I could have done so to them alone, but thankfully Her Majesty ordered I do so at once on the spot without time for me to prepare. My only hope is that my two sisters are able to thwart me. And save Cadence and the rest of our families.


Caramel inched towards his princess, hoping the changeling queen would be too busy listening to herself talk to notice. Sadly, he hadn't counted on the brainwashed ponies and dragon in the room doing anything other than stand there like zombies.

"You were ordered to stay put Caramel, bad soldier." Caramel was bashed in the face by a force field.

"Trying to protect someone with no chance of winning?" Chrysalis said in a disinterested tone, "Insects like you should scurry back under their rocks."

"We have to get The Princess out of here."

"The rules say when facing something you can't beat: retreat!" Cherry Coke stated.

"They didn't say abandon Princess Celestia when she's right there!" Note Worthy snapped back.

"I'd do the heroic thing and say 'I want you to leave me', but I'd be lying," Banjo hissed through the pain.

"Spike, send the signal to Digger Wasp, and an order to Hercules Beetle to divert troops to the wedding hall immediately."

"Yes Your Majesty," Spike droned, pulling out scroll and swiftly scribbling a message on a second note.

"Spike no!" Rarity called.

"Sorry, it's what Her Majesty wants," Spike replied.

"What about what I want? What about what you want?"

"I'm sorry Rarity."

"And I'm sad Spike. Do you want me sad?"

"No but it's what Her Majesty wants."


I kept talking, like most of my friends, I can talk my muzzle off when need be. Nopony's eyes were on my target, Shining's were on his men, Chrysalis' were on Cadence, Twilight's eyes were on our fronts, Spike was on me, and Applejack's was on our backs.

Only Pinkie Pie knows I can use my telekinesis without making my horn visibly glow, it's a little trick I've learned as a side product of the illusion magic I've studied for presenting my dresses as I did with Hoity Toity.

With precision and quietness that Trixie and Twilight can't compare to, I lifted our Princess' crown off the floor, maneuvering it around the field of vision of the wicked queen and our enslaved friends.

Princess Celestia's crown wasn't mere gold, or I didn't think it was, it had taken a full head on magical blast and was only scorched rather than sundered, I hoped that proved it was made of sterner stuff. I silently apologized to our Princess for using her crown this way.

I had struck Spike once already this hour, twice more pained me, but what had to be done had to be done, and with that thick dragon hide of his, this would just knock him off kilter instead of cracking skull like it would a pony.

I focused all of my magic, the crown still wasn't glowing, and the assembled ponies had thankfully been wise enough not to say a word as they saw what I was doing. Just a little more, in position. Alright, focus as much as you can, they'll be prepared for a strike on the queen, that's what they'll try to block. Focus, center, breath, think of Equestria, and like a falcon, STRIKE-


The crown, still going fast, Sweetie Belle, NO! PLEASE! NOT AGAIN! I GRAB THE CROWN WITH FULL FORCE and stop it just in time before it can touch a hair on Sweetie's Belle head.

"Sweetie! Out of the way! Spike's not himself!" I begged. I had forgotten completely how Sweetie and her friends could sprint like lightning if they were so inclined, covering the span of the hall in a moment...I hadn't even seen her until it was almost too late. Almost. Again. Almost I had hurt her again. Sweetie Belle, I'm sorry.

She was smiling at me, her eyes wide and staring. "Sister, please don't hurt Spike, he's just helping Chryssy."

I gasped. I looked to my baby sister as she stood using herself as a shield, always smiling. "No…Not…Sweetie, not you too."


Mah heart broke in two. "Sweetie."

All Ah could think about is 'why is this happenin'?" Spike...Applejack...Sweetie...She...she took them all. Mah sister...two of mah best friends...Ah'd never felt so alone...


Scootaloo did the only thing she could think of and hugged Applebloom. Silver Spoon's lip quivered. Silver Tongue felt ashamed he couldn't stop the white filly in time.

"That's very good of you Sweetie Belle!" Twilight praised. "You're a good filly!"

"Thank you!" She chirped back.

"Y-you, y-you, YOU MONSTER!" Rarity screamed.

"Don't throw a fit pony, I'm the one having a bad day," Chrysalis said matter of fact, "I didn't tell my little song bird to do anything. She did that one on her own, didn't you?"

"Yes Chryssy! I wanted to help!"

"And yes you did." Chrysalis ruffled Sweetie's mane affectionately, "But don't risk yourself like that again, you're far too important, my little song bird, to be sacrificed in that matter."


"DON'T YOU DARE TOUCH HER!" Rarity snarled.

Meanwhile, Spike went about his given task of dragon mailing off the two message.

"Sister, don't resist. We can have so much fun together!" Sweetie Belle said like Rarity was refusing to do something because it wasn't 'couth' again. "You don't wanna end up like that other unicorn do you?" Sweetie grinned. "She went KA-CRACK!" Sweetie made a short happy jump.

Rarity took a step back, her head swimming. The world turning completely unreal. "N-no."

The green eyed filly turned and waved at her friends. "Hey! Scoots, 'Bloom, Silver, this is great! You should join me and Spike! We can be Cutie Mark Crusader Royal Pets! Or Cutie Mark Crusader Royal Minions! Or Cutie Mark Crusader Royal Dark Apprentices! It's totally awesome!" Then she said in a zombie-like, "Join us. Joooooiiiinn uuuuuussss!" She burst out laughing. "Heheh! But seriously, let Chryssy fix you up, you'll love it."

Fluttershy felt sick to her stomach.

"Ain't she just adorable?" AJ said smiling. "Come on Rarity," she said sagely, "You and Sweetie did promise to try new things together."

"It'll make a lovely friendship report for Teacher," Twilight encouraged.

"Not this again," Pinkie Diane lament with a hint of despair.

Chrysalis thoroughly enjoyed the love the filly offered her on a silver platter, she chuckled, as sweet as Sweetie Belle was Chrysalis had a schedule to keep, time to start rounding up the cattle for Hadn't there been two unicorn guards at the back of the doorway? Must have run off like the panicky animals they were, let them, there was nowhere for them to run.

The idiot who had tried to ruin everything, showing his dedication to be removed from the gene pool, hadn't done the intelligent thing and taken his broke mare friend of the week and fled like anything with the slightest trace of self preservation. What was the best punishment? Breaking his back, slamming him into a few walls, and draining his talking love-doll into an empty husk in front of him, would make for a decent start. Maybe hoof him over to Kabuto after that. Seriously, she was doing these cattle a favor culling the stupid and suicidal from their numbers.

As for her lesser half, she didn't have the courage to face herself, Twilight, and Shining all together. Crushing Celestia and making an example of that middle aged mare had cowed rest of the cattle.


Well. Am I scared? This prince is ready to wet his royal self. I want to scream and hide underneath a table. But Cadence wasn't running, so I wouldn't run either. I should have grabbed Arcana and galloped for he nearest doctor. Instead I stayed near my cousin. Hmmmm. If I made a big enough mule of myself, maybe I could get the talking bad dream so mad that while she's busy delivering mind numbingly pain upon my royal nerve endings, cousin could reach Auntie. Maybe she could help her? They were both Alicorns.


A bluish gray unicorn stallion with a black mane, Long Haul as his friends knew him, stood at his post in Canterlot Castle's communications room. He kept his eyes on the time. '600...599...598...'

A burst of dragon fire descended next to him and materialized into a scroll. He narrowed his eyes and took it.

"What is it sir?" asked one of the workers under him.

"Just an order from Her Majesty. We're to do a shift change now," he said, folding it a putting it away.

"Already? But our shift doesn't end for another ten minutes."

"There's been a change of plans, you're all getting to leave duty early," he said in a friendly, casual tone. "Her Majesty is a good ruler after all, she wants to be fair to her followers."

"Right about that!" replied a green eyed unicorn, one of the ones in charge of sending letters.

As everypony began gathering their things, he slowly trotted over to the door and locked it silently.

He trotted over to the lights and took a careful, calculating look over the group, making a close check of everyone's locations.

Green bolts of energy lit up the room and when the lights back on, the majority of the troops in the room lay unconscious on the ground, except for a number of green eyed unicorns, some of which had attacked their fellows.

"What's going on in there?" asked a guard's voice from the other side of the door.

He trotted over. "Oh, just a short circuit in some of the radios and a minor explosion, no pony is hurt, please keep an eye for the maintenance crew, we've already called for them," he replied.

"...Alright, will do."

Long Haul trotted over to the green eyed unicorns. "Keep sending the all clear messages," he stated, his tone now cold and calculating.

"Yes, boss."

The 'unicorn' nodded. "And send out the order, it's time to begin, so says Her Majesty."

"Yes sir."

Long Haul moved over and picked up one of the unconscious guards. "This is bothersome, why couldn't you cattle just make this easy?"


An unassuming pegasus guard patrolled the halls silently. As he did so, several ponies, some guards, some not, slowly filed in behind him.

"Sir, her Majesty has signaled we begin early," reported one of them.

The pegasus nodded. "Do as she says, it's time to-"

A letter materialized directly in front of him. He took it and carefully read it.

"What is it, sir?"

"We're needed in the Wedding Hall, now," he ordered, "For Her Majesty!"

The other 'pegasi' joined him, swarming towards the Wedding Hall.


Digger Wasp and Hercules Beetle should have read their orders by now.

This day has turned out perfect after all, this will be the day I've dreamed of since I was small. In spite of idiots and trouble makers everything important has gone as it should.

Wait. I sense something...No!

You are joking! This is absurd! It's completely illogical! This is ridiculous! It's not even possible! This didn't happen before! She wasn't here before! How could the other one even be here?! Wait! You are kidding me! Those two guards!


When we saw something take our Princess head-on...we quickly voted that we needed the scarier princess, and plenty of back-up.


Now I have to worry about quaternary non-characters? What a headache! The anti-teleportation wards were still in place, but I felt the immense power of the night itself coming down on me with a small army of tiny pieces of her essence flying behind her. That was the bad news. The worse news was Hercules Beetle and my changelings would arrived second. And even if they did arrive in time, I couldn't be sure she wouldn't just plow straight through them.

I wasn't looking forward to a fight with the more ruthless of the Royal Sisters after the unwanted surprise with Celestia. The reports from the Griffin Wars on thousand years ago showed that. What was worse was I had a feeling a focused laser made from moonlight wouldn't have as much collateral damage to worry about as a beam of solar plasma. Being in a room full of innocent civilians was not going to help me against her! This wasn't according to plan. Why had everything changed like this, it made no sense!

And the amount of power I felt coming towards me at the force of a comet wasn't giving me time for reflection!

"Your Majesty? Are you alright?" My purple pony asked. I looked at her seeing worry and concern in her eyes. Blech! I refuse to lose here! I refuse to die here! I refuse to be swept aside!

And it all came to me in one moment.

"Shining, drop the barrier," I ordered.

"Yes Your Majesty." The shield around Canterlot dissolved.

"Quake before the power of the Night!" The Canterlot Royal Voice boomed, causing the windows to shudder, not slowing down to negotiate, not slowing down to demand a surrender. From the energy I felt, she was instead charging up to try and blow my head off with one shot. I had to admire her, she wasn't as naive as her sister.

I placed my horn against Shining Armor's, I tap into his magic, assume direct control. A twisted green roaring fire engulfs us. Shining Armor is clearly in pain. Too bad. I don't have time to waste on making this pleasant! I force myself harder and harder into him, he feels pain and pleasure at my magic's touch. His heart is ashamed but he can't resist. He tilts his head back and cries out, our horn still touching, and the barrier reappears and expands around us in the blink of an eye. It passes through my changelings without harm, or the cattle in the wedding hall... however.


Princess Luna didn't stop as the barrier exploded in front of her, but it had changed, she had time to gasp in shock as the barrier hit her hard. She and her Night Guard, and nearly every free royal guard in Canterlot, were all sent flying out of the city, over the landscape, and over the horizon at blinding speed, Luna only able to redirect the power from the beam she'd been moments from firing at the queen to try and pull the innocent ponies close to herself.


The brainwashed slaves looked with joy and satisfaction, the heroes and guests looked in terror and despair. Chrysalis panted, Shining Armor's body shivered involuntarily. The Queen looked around, chest heaving and head aching from the magic overload, and a few moment later, the only sound anypony could hear in the wedding hall was the sound of Queen Chrysalis, laughing.


"And that is how it should have ended the first time," Chrysalis said like to a lover as she looked at the crowd of broken faces.

"Princess Luna," Fluttershy whispered, "All those ponies."

"This...this isn't right." Pinkie Pie more to herself than anyone.

"Horseapples," RD hissed.

"Please be alright." Rarity whispered remembering how the ponies who had been thrown out all had wings. She hoped she wasn't just saying that to herself. Still, they had princess Luna with them didn't they?

"You should have all just played nice with Her Majesty!" Sweetie Belle called out the window.

The two other flower fillies and Silver were shivering. The guest likewise were petrified at the sight of their leaders as such. Cadence meanwhile was disgusted at herself for standing here like a mare in distress, but her legs removed to move. All the horrors she bought, why was she paralyzed by this. What was this sick feeling of right yet wrong from this monster?

Several pegasus royal guard then forced their way through the windows. Hope filled everypony's hearts, that quickly turned to despair as they were engulfed in green flames that turned into stubbier, smaller, bug-like ponies like the queen herself, but with compound eyes.

"Use the doors," Chrysalis grumbled.

Ignoring the slaves, Princesses, Elements and the groomstallions, the bugs began from the front to organizes the guests by gender and species.

Celestia looked at the monsters terrorizing her ponies as she struggled to think clearly through her repairing brain. 'Breezies. Flutterponies. I didn't want your legacy to be this.'

The lead pegasus guard landed next to the changeling queen and said, "I am here Your Majesty."

Chrysalis said indignantly. "Congratulations Hercules Beetle, once again you fail to protect your queen, I had to do your job and your sluggishness forced me to rework our entire plans. You are nothing if not consistent."

Green flames surrounding the pegasus guard, revealing a larger, more well armored Changeling with black and gold armor adorning his frame. He genuflected, "Forgive me my Queen, I came as quickly as-"

She struck him with one hoof.

"And your quickest was too slow. If it wasn't for my quick thinking, I'd be dead. Inform Goliath Beetle he is my new general, you'll be serving as his first officer."

"My Queen! Please pick someling else! I'll gladly serve as a foot soldier if you wish it. But my brother is too reckless to-"

"He has never failed his queen. And thanks to you reckless just might be what's needed. Are you questioning me Hercules?"


"Then do as I say."

"As you command my queen!" The changeling said without a trace of sarcasm or irony.

"Ya did yer best. That's all anypony can ask of ya, there's no shame in that."

The armored changeling looked back at the brainwashed Applejack in surprise.

"I didn't ask you to speak," Chrysalis said.

"Ya didn't ask me not to."

The queen rubbed her non-existent eyebrows, and refused a Changeling trying to tend to her head wound.

"My little song bird?"

"Yes Chryssy?"

"Give all of Canterlot your grand debut."


Sweetie Belle obediently, eagerly, practically willing hopped out onto the balcony, and with help from Chrysalis' magic, plopped her rump on the extra large guard rails like a stage. Sweetie gave Rarity a triumphant look that made Rarity's heart skip a beat. The filly then began to sing.

="Evil Luna's Song" - Silver Star Story Complete=

Rarity recognized the song, even if Sweetie was only singing to the the melody and not the lyrics. That song?! Their FAMILY'S SONG? Kept private for generations?!

"What is the point of this you witch?!"

Chrysalis shrugged casually. "I don't really understand it myself. But my little song bird's voice, and her song, carries within it a year's worth of love for a changeling. My subjects shouldn't be able to even metabolize that much love. And yet, her voice and this song, gives us all strength." Chrysalis grinned. "Maybe she just has the right spirit."

Green magic began to flow out of the filly's mouth like sparkling mist almost, and the sparkles gravitated to every changeling in the room and continued to float outside.

"There's something fascinating about her, isn't there Cadence?" The princess of music startled at how personal the monster now sounded. "Something almost familiar, a filly with such an obvious gift, and yet she turns a blind eye to it. Why could such a thing be Cadence?"

All the Elements wondered how to pop the witch's bubble by telling her the CMC were just thick-headed without hurting the little fillies' feelings.

But Cadence found herself thinking, feeling that the witch was right, there was something strangely familiar about the musical filly, or maybe she was just letting the witch's head games get to her. She tried drawing some strength from the filly's song as well as covertly as possible, but as it wasn't directed at her nor could she actively draw it in without giving away one of the few trump cards she still had up her sleeves, she could only regain enough strength to stand on her own, not nearly enough to fight. Not nearly enough to do anything.


This queen of lies. Ah hate 'er guts. Ponies ain't supposed ta hate like this, but Ah can't stand it. I'm disgusted at 'er. No Ah don't want 'er dead, do Ah look like a savage? Ah want her ta see the truth, for all these lies she's used to use us and she's made me say to bite 'er in the flank, for her to stare straight into the cruelest of truths and weep like a baby!

Ah want done with this here queen of Lies? I want to swim to the surface of this muck she has meh buried in and stop her? There's a choice Ah can make that'll fix 'er, and fix all mah friends and anypony else she has under her spell. Ah can save em, after all, the truth sets ya free. And show all her underlings how screwed up their worldview is. All Ah gotta do is accept the power. Ah can feel it, at the edge of mahself, Ah wanna dive into it, become one with it. And shine for everypony ta see me! Tearin' away all them falsehoods they've built around themselves. Would Ah become a monster to fight the worse monster?

And it would be an evil they know opposed to an evil they don't.

There's Trixie safe back in Hoofington, and big brother Mac in Ponyville, they could use the Elements to fix me after Ah'm done trouncing this here witch. Ah could even get a lot of good done in the mean time. Ah could get them Canterlot ponies ta see the truth that they ain't no better than anypony else, and get Princess Celestia's subjects ta see she just wants to be accepted by 'em as a friend and not just our Princess. I could get Mitta to see the truth she oughta just forgive herself and move on. Ah could get Princess Luna ta see the truth of how out-dated some of her ideas of what's alright and what isn't are. Ah could even get Big Mac ta see the truth he doesn't have ta be in his shell all the time. Ah can get RD ta tell the truth of Discord's day to Cloudsdale! Just like Ah got'er to finally see what a jerk she's been to Derpy, and Ah'll get all these cowards to see the truth! They'll hate me but Ah won't bucking care cause the truth's the truth and shouldn't be--NO!


Thinkin' Ah can direct the beast if Ah let her out? Ah know that's a lie. Becomin' a Nightmare is like a fire: light it and it'll burn what yah want it to, but it ain't stoppin' there. It's the nature of the beast.

The truth is, that is what Ah wanted. Ah never liked how most of the rules for Aunt and Uncle Orange's 'proper pony' spiel was say one thing and mean another. Ah told Twili' how Ah was gonna accept 'Cadence's' little white lie and have that be that, and it went and caused all this. Ah hate it. Ah'm a practical pony, Ah know ya can't go sayin' everythin' ta everypony, even if Ah don't like it... Ah can't do it. Ah ain't lettin' Nightmare Mirror loose on the world. Ah ain't makin' it so mah friends have ta worry about another monster. Ah just hurt Rainbow Dash worse than Discord ever could, because everythin' Ah showed her was the truth. That was close enough tah Nightmare Mirror for mah tastes. Ah won't hurt mah friends and family and a bunch of innocent ponies the same way. Not now. Not ever. Ah'm sorry girls, Ah just can't do it. Ah'll just have keep tryin' tah swim tah the surface of this muck she's drownin' meh in and hope yer hooves will be waitin' tah pull meh out when Ah get there. Stay in limbo where ya belong Nightmare Mirror, Ah ain't never becomin' ya, so just forget about it.


"I LIKED IT BETTER WHEN WE JUST DID INTROSPECTIVE ONE-SHOTS!" I cried out seeing the nasty and cruel bug ponies bullying everypony. Nopony paid me mind. An invading army? Betrayal? Impostors? When did we become a war drama?! This wasn't right! I didn't feel like the world was piling up contradictions, but everything still felt broken to me. We were supposed to be having the happy ending now! Everything dramatic was supposed to have been solved and we could finally just live our lives! Nothing felt like it needed fixing, but everything still felt broken.

HEH-HEH-HEH. I can fix-fix-fix that. I can make the world right again. I can have this back to a nice merchandise driven little girls' half-hour toy commercial where everything is happy-happy-happy and bright-bright-bright and there's no such thing as hatred. I just need to accept lent power. Hmm. That Nerutrot reference doesn't work well in first person. How silly-silly-silly of me! I should make the whole WORLD silly-silly-silly again! Minty will be herself again! Rainbow Dash will be herself again! Princess Rarity will be herself again! And all the brainwashing the Alicorns and the Draconequi did to all my friends can go away!

Stop Pinkie Pie. Just stop. You've already had your 'almost fall into darkness' plot point. Don't go recycling scripts at a time like this. You've got to stay calm. Stay smart. Stay focused. Well, stay on task, keep your mind on your friends, and don't go crazy. And going all 'super nice in a bad way' isn't going to help anypony the way they need help right now either. We haven't done any bad guy fights bad guy plot points and I don't want to be the first one! And if Zecora was here, she'd say,

Don't focus on who your friends were in the past.
Help them as they are in the present while they last.

Right imaginary Zecora. I really need to stop mentioning that plot point every one of my narratives or I'm going to end up flanderizing myself. Alright Pinkie Pie! Think! We're not in a grim dark fic after all! No way the authors brought us all this way just to have a nasty twist ending! Even the Second Age Ponies had their happy ending! There's gotta be an opening now or soon! Find it and use it! After all, the darkest hour is just a part of the story! And we'll get to the dawn even if we have to fight our hardest for it! We'll get our happy ending no matter how long it takes!


A tiny star flew into the wedding hall, then exploded in a blinding white flash of light magic.

"PRINCESS RUN!" Twinkle Shine's voice cried out.
My Little Pony Friendship Is Magic
Pony POV Series
Not The Wedding You Remember
Part 10
Then All Of Tartarus Broke Loose
By Alex Warlorn

Everybody loves a wedding episode. Especially one with one point five amnesic gods getting married and a point five one in attendance, a dark god looming in the background, a shadow given life rising to challenge, and the fate of a kingdom in the balance. Oh, and no doubt the mother of all angry explosions when Twilight finds out that her brother didn't tell her he was getting married. 

Seen this a million times before right? Except . . . not. While there have been many experiences to the ponies now their timeline has broken away from the Heart World, something is VERY WRONG here. 

Things are spiraling out of control faster and faster! 


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The chapter begins with the Changeling Queen taking the recent turn of events not so well. She completely snaps and tries to kill either Cadence, Blueblood or both of them. However Arcane Spell is able to shield them from the deadly strike yet she has to pay a high price for this and the backslash injures her horribly. With this murder attempt Chrysalis did ruin any possibility for her to try to claim to be the true Alicorn. Cadence takes this chance to reveal to anybody that they are dealing with Changelings and in pure frustration Chrysalis reveals herself. According to Princess Celestia’s inner monologue the Changelings are actually the descendants of the race butchered by Discord. But the Alicorn is one of the few that actually still remembers them so the impact is lost to the other ponies.

However this Changeling Queen is much smarter then her canon counterpart, who did decide that turning your back to your most important prisoners and singing a villain song was the best idea and later on she challenged the Element of Magic while all MAGIC on the world was powered up. Okay, maybe in the show Chrysalis wasn’t that smart but here things are different. For example she did use her control over Shining to place her army INSIDE Canterlot. Most of the Royal Guards that could have foiled this invasion are actually Changelings, they ARE the invasion. Rainbow Dash tries to do the pragmatic thing and is ready to Sonic Rainboom the head of the queen off right now but is stopped by the corrupted Applejack. Meanwhile Pinkie Pie thinks for a moment that since the Changelings need love, they can not be as bad as Discord who mostly got his kicks out of seeing others miserable. However her fourth wall breaking powers allow her to actually take a look into Chrysalis’s soul where all good did die a long time ago and now the evil that is left is using her predator nature as an excuse to be a complete monster. In turn Pinkie Pie is shocked, Rarity tries to think of a non-lethal way to solve this (but none comes to mind), Fluttershy is busy trying to calm the panicked birds down while the CMC are hugging each other. However they fail to notice that Sweetie is grinning like a manic.

Silver Tongue is trying his best to protect his daughter from this monster while Shining’s friends try to get him to do something about this disaster. When they make clear that they will not just stand aside, Shining breaks Banjo’s leg without even hesitating. It can not be denied that these ponies turn into monsters under Queen Chrysalis’s influence. Celestia is instantly able to put together that the captain has been corrupted and orders Spike to inform the army and her sister. Her experience really shows as neither the CMC, Shining’s friends nor Rainbow Dash were able to put things that fast together themselves. But the Changeling Queen did infect the dragon a while ago and not even Rarity seems to be able to do anything about it. Chrysalis launches into a speech that she actually realized that her enemies were dangerous and she did slowly prepare her invasion over centuries to counter this. Through ironically her claims of being better then Discord fall short since the only reason he lost was because of a Cosmic Retcon. His plan wasn’t perfect but it was still good enough to allow him to take this entire world and he did it all by himself. Being much more powerful then the Changeling Queen did help a lot of course but while she is smart, she is underestimating his cunning A LOT. He did truly take the lessons from the Tarot of the Devil to heart. She however has more in common with the Valeyard, her preparations are better but Discord doesn’t need this kind of preparation as long as he keeps his mind together. Similar to the Valeyard she is also far too full of herself.

Unfortunately Celestia herself is not as ruthless as her sister and doesn’t blast the Changeling Queen in the back while she is giving her speech (which is ironically a weakness Chrysalis still shares with her canon counterpart). The Alicorn offers her one final chance to stop the invasion but when the Changeling Queen predictably rejects this chance, Celestia goes for the “kill it with fire” approach. Much to the shock of the arrogant ruler, Celestia actually wins the battle of powers and overwhelms the enemy with pure magical strength. However the corpse that is left behind is actually very much alive. A shame Celestia didn’t headshot the corpse to be sure. The Changeling Queen might have been forced to fake her death but now she counterattacks the surprised Alicorn and is able to overwhelm her. And even now Celestia reveals in her inner monologue that she didn’t fight with her full power as that would have literally killed everybody else in this room. Even now the fact that her victory was nowhere near as onesided as in canon seems to anger the Queen, which is a bit pathetic. Did she really think that she was the only one that could become stronger compared to the show? Considering how egoistically her thoughts were before, the answer is likely yes. It would certainly explain the mistakes she has done so far. Actually she is a bit similar to her big sibling Azure Raven who also only gave credit to those it had defeated to make its victories even more impressive. And while it is fair to say that she has more personality then the Mary Sue who basically had no defining character traits of its own, she isn’t really any more likeable then it was.

Rainbow Dash takes charge rather then just gawk at the monster before them but the corrupted Twilight Sparkle stops them with a barrage of spell blasts. The unicorn has become quite creepy under the influence yet Dash is still determined to kill the Changeling Queen and sort out this mind control chaos later. It is a nice show of competency to try to kill the villain as soon as possible instead of letting her get away and continue her plan. Unfortunately the infected Applejack cruelly stops her by weaponizing her truth vision against her former friend. It is especially disturbing since this was the one thing the farmer vowed to NEVER do and it was the biggest difference between her and the cruel Nightmare Mirror. Right now Applejack’s poor victim has a breakdown over various painful truths about Derpy leaving Dash unable to do what has to be done. Thankfully Rarity is able to kick AJ aside before she can hurt her friend even more. In turn the farmer is deeply ashamed of herself and her hatred for the selfish Queen knows no bonds, especially since her little sister saw the normally dependable pony act like a monster. It is very important that she promises to NEVER forgive this crime since these ponies are so forgiving. But Chrysalis already crossed the line and there will be no forgiveness for her. If this ends up causing Applejack to turn Nightmare and crush the skull of the Changeling Queen beneath her hoofs there is only one to blame: the Queen.

Cadence is broken that she could so far do nothing to take down the monster who continues to harm those dear to her. The monster in question takes this chance to thank everybody who made this possible like the good friends that left Twilight alone when she needed them the most or Applejack who was too worried about the privacy of others to use the one ability that could have revealed the invasion early. It reminds Rainbow Dash a lot of what Discord did to hurt her and since AJ was there when the pegasus did need her the most, she promises to be there for her friend as well. Applebloom tries to reach the farmer but like before with Spike, it fails to do anything but hurt the infected pony. Deep down the corrupted ones all know that they are doing something horribly wrong but there is nothing they can do to stop it. When Chrysalis tries to eat some of Twilight’s love to recharge, Starlight Sparkle becomes so enraged that she teleports right into the face of the sociopath and unleashes everything she has. The Changeling Queen is able to evade and block everything this normal unicorn throws at her but eventually her carelessness gets the better of her and the mother of her two victims is actually able to land a small hit.

The minor injury causes the insane Queen to snap again as another normal pony did ruin her act of superiority. In turn she breaks all four of Starlight’s legs and slams her against the wall. Only the quick reaction of her husband prevents the death of the mother. Afterwards Chrysalis rants how Starlight is only a background pony that has no role in this story. It is strange how similar these claims sounds to what Azure Raven kept saying again and again. The irony is that villains like Discord and Nightmare Eclipse are well aware how important minor characters are and frequently used them to screw over those who they wanted to torment. But Chrysalis already made the mistake of underestimating background ponies with Blueblood and yet she seems unwilling to learn from it. Not so surprising since that would mean to admit that she herself made a mistake in the first place. Meanwhile both Twilight and Shining can do nothing to help their beloved family. The earth pony and pegasus interviewers however are very willing to help and they could inform EVERYBODY of this invasion and backup would arrive very soon. However the unicorn interviewer reveals what her previous narrations already made clear to the reader: she is infected by Chrysalis just like many other poor victims. Her underestimation allowed the sociopath to corrupt the interviewer. To prevent the two other interviewers from using their powers to ruin her plans, the unicorn interviewer casts a spell that turns all of them into mortals. Considering our bad luck this likely means that a few of the horrors sealed by Amicitia break free right now.

While this does lessen the danger of the two interviewers to the Changeling Queen, she does loose her most important spy and manipulator at the same time. Once the spell is done, the pegasus interviewer finds herself actually with the Wonderbolts, one of those that she listed as potential help. Well they are not as useful as say Queen Tiamat but if she could convince them, then they could help in the upcoming struggle. The earth pony on the other side finds herself and Peewee in the middle of Canterlot. Finally the unicorn interviewer is standing on the roof of the wedding ceremony (ironic how the one who had the most control over the spell ended up in the strangest place). She reveals that she could have actually only forced her two sisters into mortality but since the Changeling Queen didn’t give her enough time to prepare, she ended up being dragged into the spell as well. The errors of the Changeling Queen are pilling up and sooner or later this will backfire horribly on her.

While Shining’s friend struggle what they could do, the Changeling Queen sends messages to her nearby forces. But Rarity knows that it is pointless to talk with Spike in his current state, it does however make for a very useful distraction while she readies her magic. She can cast spells without making her horn glow, allowing for one surprise attack. It is good to see such a pragmatic mind deciding that the line for forgiveness has been crossed. Celestia was right about trusting her and Rainbow Dash to be ready when the time comes. So the unicorn prepares to kill the Changeling Queen with one swift strike with Princess Celestia’s crown. It is a very good plan that could have prevented a lot of future misery but unfortunately the infected Sweetie Belle shields the Queen. The actions of the Changeling Queen had almost resulted in Rarity killing her own sister. I wonder if that would have resulted in her going Nightmare, after all it was mentioned several times how hard it was for the white unicorn to go Nightmare. The realization that even her little sister is infected by this taint shocks Rarity to her very core. Applebloom and Scootalloo suffer as well, AB has it the worst as she has lost two friends and her closest family member to this corruption. The way Sweetie Belle talks about joining the sociopath and how casually she talks about Starlight almost dying before her very eyes is absolutely nauseating.

Meanwhile Chrysalis did notice that two of the guards seem to be missing but she doesn’t care about that for now. How often must something “unimportant” backfire on her before she realizes that the world is not as simple as she sees it? She is also unable to see that fact that Blueblood is still around as anything but the failure of his self-preservation instincts and is already brainstorming how she could torture him for revealing her true self. Actually he is thinking that he could sacrifice himself to allow Cadence to reach Celestia even if he will suffer a fate worse then death for that. Meanwhile Digger Wasp (in the form of Long Haul) receives the orders from the Changeling Queen and with the help of several mind controlled victims he is able to take over the communications room, preventing the truth from being revealed. Hercules Beetle (disguised as a random guard) also rushes to the Wedding Hall with his troops but he isn’t the only one on his way there.

As it turns out the two guards that the Changeling Queen thought didn’t matter, did do the smart thing and got Princess Luna and her guards as backup. Now the Alicorn of the Night rushes into the battle and Queen Chrysalis knows that she WILL loose a direct confrontation this time as Princess Luna will not waste mercy on her. Instead she is ready to blow the head of the Changeling Queen right off and unlike the poor Starlight, Luna has the power to do so. But Chrysalis has a bit of time left, so she forces Shining to drop his shield and joins with him. While the union between Cadence and Shining is pure love, this twisted union is rape. The Changeling Queen basically forces herself into him and blasts Luna and every free guard out of the city. Unlike in the show the fact that they are clearly spread all over the place is taken in consideration and Luna has to use her own power to keep them together and stop these mortals from dying once they impact the ground. It took Chrysalis clearly a lot of effort but she won a second time by exploiting others. Everybody who is still able to think by themselves is absolutely horrified, this blast could have killed so many and if they survive it is certainly not because of the Changeling Queen.

Now the backup of Chrysalis arrives and begins to organize the present ponies like they are some cattle. Then the Changeling Queen shows her gratitude to her loyal commander who did exactly follow her plan by criticizing him for being too slow. He came immediately and the only thing his earlier arrival could have changed would have been that Luna would be forced to kill a lot of Changelings to get through the sociopath leading them. But for Chrysalis this was never about the Changelings, it is only about herself. By now the Changelings would be off much better if Luna had succeeded in killing their Queen, then those who figured out the much easier and safer way to harvest love could gain more influence within the swarm. So for failing her by doing exactly what she told him… she demotes him to serve under Goliath Beetle. But now we actually get a really good scene as the Changeling begs for his Queen to reconsider her choice since Golitah Beetle is too reckless. He would gladly accept a much further demotion if she would reconsider this. Now this takes guts to stand up to the powerful sociopath who loves to punish others for her own mistakes. Yet unsurprisingly Chrysalis is not willing to listen to reason. Even in her tainted state Applejack feels sorry for the Changeling that did nothing wrong and yet was still punished.

Both the Changelings and ponies suffer under her, especially Rarity who has to see her sister happily perform the secret family song before all of Canterlot like a little monster. It is as depressing as Applebloom having to witness Applejack attacking Rainbow. This song serves to strengthen the Changelings but both Chrysalis and Cadence feel that there is something familiar in that filly. While the Alicorn is able to draw some power from the song, it is not enough to really be in any condition to fight against the monster before her. But there are two who could fight against the sociopath: Applejack hates Chrysalis so much for what she did to her family, friends and herself that the mare wants to unleash the cruellest of truths upon her enemy. She wants to force this coward to look into her own pathetic truth to break her spirit. The farmer is very much tempted to become the Nightmare of Truth, but she knows that she wouldn’t be able to stop with the Queen or her Changelings. Yet her friends have a very good chance to stop her afterwards. They have already dealt with two Nightmares and without the Elder Horn, she wouldn’t be as powerful as Nightmare Whisper anyway. And it is fair to say that Nightmare Mirror would be the lesser of the two evils. But in the end she can not do it, unlike the Queen she doesn’t want innocents to be caught in the crossfire and she doesn’t want to hurt her friends while doing so. Yet this does leave her mind struck as a prisoner in her own body while the body remains under the control of the sociopath she hates so much.

At the same time Pinkie Pie is having a breakdown. She absolutely hates it that after all the hard work, all the struggles and all the suffering they still haven’t earned their happy endings. Even now new villains keep crawling out of the woodwork. But there are ways to fix this fundamental unfairness of the world. Just turn it into something closer to Generation 3 without villains, conflicts, unhappiness and with all the old friends that she has lost. All she had to do would be to become Nightmare Granfalloon, the Nightmare of Laughter. Then amusingly she tells herself that she will not recycle this idea from an earlier episode and what her friends now need more then anything is her to stay sane and competent. She even imagines Zecora telling her that she still has friends in the present that she can save instead of focusing on her loss. The pink pony will use everything she has to help her friends, she just needs an opening. Speaking of an opening, suddenly a bright light blinds everybody. The other characters Chrysalis has deemed unimportant have arrived to give the heroes a chance to escape.

Overall this was quite a ride. While the Changeling Queen did defeat Celestia, Luna and the interviewers, she had to use every bit of preparation to do so. A lot of resources went into this battle and not only was she forced into revealing herself and her brainwashed slaves, she also lost her biggest trump card by turning the unicorn interviewer into a mortal. She is not exactly useless in this state but far less useful then she was before. At the same time the flaws of the Changeling Queen are also becoming more obvious: She is arrogant beyond measure, she treats her Changelings poorly once she is in a bad mood, she thinks that the world rotates around herself, she is unable to understand that others are growing as well, her world view is at times very simple and while she did learn from the mistakes her canon counterpart made, she doesn’t learn from her own mistakes. Her plan is only in danger because of her own mistakes but she much rather blames this on her minions or her victims not following her script. Both Nightmare Eclipse and Discord simply had much more experience then her in keeping things under control. The irony is that she has genuine strengths but she seems to be a bit too fixated on gaining more power to truly improve.
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yoshiegg64 Featured By Owner Edited Jun 10, 2015
Queen Chryasis really broke under the pressure of her plan was not perfect. If only she remained calm she could have used Applejack to convince everypony she was the "REAL" Princess Cadance. Then again, knowing how her plans go, it would have backfired somehow. Maybe sort of like this?

:iconpinkiepiewaitwutplz::iconsays3plz:"Two princess cadences!? Which one is the real one? Wait does I mean I have to plan another party?"

:iconrarityfaintplz::iconsays3plz: "Oh no, I know where this is going! That must be Cadence's evil twin who secretly has feelings for Twilight's brother and has come to win him back! Oh the drama."

:icondashwhateverplz::iconsays3plz:"You read too many romance novels!" 

:iconcadenceevilplz::iconsays3plz:"Inconceivable!? Even now Fate continues to throw a wrench into my perfect plans. Well I will show her."

:icontwilighthuhplz::iconsays3plz:"Wait don't do anything rash my majesty that will convince everypony you are the say shoot the impostor."

:iconcadenceevilplz::iconsays3plz:"...Like I would do anything that stupid."

:icontwilighthappyplz::iconsays3plz:"If I may suggest something." *Whispers her plan.*

:iconprincesscelestiaplz::iconsays3plz:"What are you two whispering about?"

:icontwilighthappyplz::iconsays3plz:"Sorry Princess Celesita I was discussing on how to tell who the real Candance is and I think I know how we can tell."

:iconcelestiaorlyplz::iconsays3plz:"You do?"

:icontwilightshappyplz::iconsays3plz:"Is is simply really. We will just have Applejack tell us. She can detect who is lying about their identify."

:iconapplejackshockedplz::iconsays3plz:"Uh what!"

:iconangrycelestia2plz::iconsays3plz:"Okay it sounds like this is the best course of action. Applejack as the bearer of the element of honesty, please tell us who is lying."


:iconcadenceevilplz::iconsays3plz:"Yes listen do your majesty and tell everypony I am the one truth princess Cadence." 

:iconcadanceseriouslyplz::iconsays3plz:"Applejack she is the impostor. She is an Changeling and has taken my form to fool you all."

:iconajconfusedplz::iconsays3plz:"Uh. Hmm, well uh, ah don't know who she's ain't."

:iconcelestiawtfplz::iconsays3plz:"You're telling me you don't know who is real."

:iconapplejack3plz::iconsays3plz:"Well it wouldn't be inaccurate to assume that ah couldn't exactly not say that it is or isn't almost partially incorrect.

:iconangrycelestia2plz::iconsays3plz:"So you do know who is real!"

:iconapplejackhappyplz::iconsays3plz:"On the contrary. I'm possibly more or less not definitely rejecting the idea that in no way with any amount of uncertainty that ah undeniably-"

:iconcelestiafacehoofplz::iconsays3plz:"Hang on that will mean..."
:iconapplejackplz::iconsays3plz:" or do not know who she shouldn't probably be, if that indeed wasn't who she isn't. Even if she wasn't who I knew she was."

:iconpinkiemakeitstopplz::iconsays3plz:"Make it stop. Make it stop."

:iconapplejackishappyplz::iconsays3plz:"That'd mean I'd really have to know who she isn't."

:iconcadenceevilplz::iconsays3plz:"ENOUGH SLAVE! I COMMAND YOU TELL ALL THESE DUMB CATTLE THAT I QUEEN CHRYSALIS IS THE REAL CADENCE. ...WAIT I DIDN'T MEAN TO SAY- Oh forget it!" *Shoots Cadence but hits Arcane Spell*"

:iconbluebloodworryplz::iconsays3plz:"Arcane Spell NO!"


:iconcadenceevilplz::iconsays3plz:"It was still worth it to put an end to that nonsense."

I bet Applejack could make for a great politician if she applied herself. :D

Also give yourself a cookie if you got the reference in here.
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2015
That bit with Rarity was FUNNY!!!

Chrysalis sheme, basically took out the heart and brain of the mane six, along with Spike who acts as their balancing force, and seemingly cripple the CMC since they're only creatively destructive as a team.

And she discarded the birdes' maids as 'worthless.'
yoshiegg64 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2015

:iconprincesscelestiaplz::iconsays3plz:"What are you two whispering about?"

:icontwilighthappyplz::iconsays3plz:"Sorry Princess Celesita I was discussing on how to tell who the real Cadence is and I think I know how we can tell."

:iconcelestiaorlyplz::iconsays3plz:"You do?"

:icontwilightshappyplz::iconsays3plz:"Is is simply really. We must hold a contest to determine who the REAL Cadence is!"

:iconrdchallengeplz::iconsays3plz:"Oh yeah a full-blown alicorn fight."

:icontwilightconfusedplz::iconsays3plz:"No, nothing like that."

:iconscootalooplz::iconsays3plz:"An ultra pony roller derby?"


:iconexcitedapplebloomplz::iconsays3plz:"Mud wrestling?"


:iconapplejackshockedplz::iconsays3plz:"What? Don't look at me."

:iconsweetiebelleidea::iconsays3plz:" A karaoke contest!"

:iconrarityplz::iconsays3plz:"Please Sweetie Bell that has to be-"


:iconwtfrarityplz::iconsays3plz:"Wait what?"

:icontwilightliciousplz::iconsays3plz:"No, you see since Cadance is the embodiment of Harmony, only by her singing can we tell who is who."

:iconcadenceevilplz::iconsays3plz: "Please tell me you are joking."

:icontwilightorlyplz::iconsays3plz: "Do you have any better ideas!?"


:iconangrycelestia2plz::iconsays3plz:"Then is it agreed. A karaoke contest will determine the identity of my niece. Until then the Wedding is postponed."

:iconsweetiebelleyay2plz::iconsays3plz:"YAY a karaoke contest isn't that great Chryssy."

:iconcadenceevilplz::iconsays3plz:"....just.... peachy."

:iconcadenceevilplz::iconthought-bubble-plz:*Ugh..I knew I should have blasted her when I got the chance.*
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2015
:D :D :D
yoshiegg64 Featured By Owner Edited Jun 10, 2015
:iconcadanceplz::iconsays3plz:"Auntie please this is silly! Do we really need to this!"

:iconrainbowdashismadplz::iconsays3plz:"I knew it! She is a pod pony send to replace the princess."

:iconrarityplz::iconsays3plz:"Dash you read too many comics. No pony here believes she is a pod pony."

:iconscootalooplz::iconsays3plz: "ARGH POD PONY!" 

:iconraritypfftplz::iconsays3plz:"Well most of us anyway."

:iconcadanceplz::iconsays3plz:"This is ridiculous. I said changeling not pod pony."

:icondashisannoyedplz::iconsays3plz:"Of course if you were not Princess Cadence then you would deny it emphatically."

:iconcadanceseriouslyplz::iconsays3plz:"No, I would claim to be a pod pony, I mean a changeling, assuming you not believe me."

:iconrainbowdashrapeface::iconsays3plz:"Then we would anticipate your assumption and we would not believe you."

:iconcadanceseriouslyplz::iconsays3plz:"I would foresee your anticipating my assumption of your're not believing me."

:icondashpouttyfaceplz::iconsays3plz:"But how could you predict I would expect your forseeing my anticipation of your assuming by not believing! HAH! Answer me that."

:iconcadancewtfplz::iconsays3plz:"I do not even know what you just said!"

:iconaskrainbowdashplz::iconsays3plz:"Precisely what I expected you to say, pod pony."

:iconcadencesrslyplz::iconsays3plz: "Oh my, everypony here just wants me to sing don't they?

:icontwilightpensiveplz: :iconrainbowdashawplz::iconraritypoutplz::iconohmyfluttershyplz::iconpinkiesmileplz::iconapplejackwhatplz::iconcelestiawtfplz: :iconsays3plz: "WEEELLLLLL"

:iconcadencesrslyplz::iconsays3plz: "FINE! I will give you singing. Give me that microphone. This first one is called This Masquerade"

:iconcadenceevilplz::iconsays3plz: "Hey I was going to sing that one you copycat."

:iconcadencesrslyplz::iconsays3plz: "Like you are one to talk!

Sweating a little...  I think I will stop now. This getting a little out of hand.
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2015

I just wish there was a way to extend the laughs on 'SA reality warped into mare' jokes you did.
yoshiegg64 Featured By Owner Edited Jun 11, 2015
(Hmmm...maybe there is but first....)

:iconsweetiebelleplz::iconsays3plz:"Oh Chryssy I mean Princess Cadence. I know a song you can sing."

:iconcadenceevilplz::iconsays3plz:"No Sweetie Belle for the last time, I am not singing gitchee gitchee goo

:iconsweetiebelleno::iconsays3plz:"Please for me!"

:iconcadenceevilplz::iconsays3plz:"The puppy dog eye look won't work on me."

:iconsweetiefakefrown::iconsays3plz:"Pretty Please!"


10 minutes later

:iconexcitedsweetiebplz::iconsays3plz:"Bow, chicka, bow-wow!"

:iconevilcadenceplz::iconsays3plz:"That's what my baby says!"


:iconevilcadenceplz::iconsays3plz:"And my heart starts pumping!"

:iconexcitedsweetiebplz::iconsays3plz:"Chicka-chicka, choo wap!"

:iconevilcadenceplz::iconsays3plz:"Never gonna stop!"

:iconexcitedsweetiebplz::iconevilcadenceplz::iconsays3plz:"Gitchee gitchee goo means that I love you!"

(The joke here is that the lead singer is also Named Cadence. XD Laugh Revamp )
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2015
I didn't see that movie, but I did get the joke.

And GEEZE, Applejack was fighting her mind control tooth and nail here.



*Chrysalis in devil costume dancing around with marakas, over a grave marked 'RIP Good Chryssy'* "I am evil Chryssy! I am evil Chryssy!"

yoshiegg64 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2015
*Chrysalis in devil costume dancing around with marakas, over a grave marked 'RIP Good Chryssy'* "I am evil Chryssy! I am evil Chryssy!"

I loved that Simpson joke too!

And GEEZE, Applejack was fighting her mind control tooth and nail here.

Could have been worse. Applejack could have wined up saying something like this.…

Also the original joke came from here. Shrek 3.…
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2015
I know.
Sherlock-Holmes18 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2015
The climax finally begins, but it doesn't look like things are going well for the protagonists.
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2015

Twinkle Shine, "SO HAVE WE!" 
yoshiegg64 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014
You know at the time, rushing the changeling queen seemed like a great idea. She very little troops nearby to support her and was already slightly weaken by Celesita and Starlight. Too bad it backfired, maybe if Luna took the time to think things through, come up with a plan perhaps...hmmm I wonder....

:iconsunguardplz: :iconsays3plz: Princess Luna wake up an impostor just revealed herself pretending to be your niece. She is going toinvade Canterlot! We need your help!

:iconshockedlunaplz: :iconsays3plz: WHAT! Where is my sister?

:iconsunguardplz: :iconsays3plz: Your highness she DEFEATED your sister.

:iconshockedlunaplz: :iconsays3plz: It can't be! Summon the night guards at once!

-Two minutes later. (After the night guard assembled)-

:iconnewlunaisseriousplz: :iconsays3plz: Okay from Mist shade's descriptions of the queen. It sounds like we are dealing with the long-thought dead Flutterponies. Since flutterponies rarely travel alone, there is most probability be an entire swarm waiting to greet us. I will use the royal canterlot shout to kinda scatter' em, so we don't have to fight a whole bunch of them at once. Uhh, when our shout are done,  I'll need Gray Tornado and his squad to use their most intimidate shouts too,  to keep them scattered and that way we won't fight too many. Then followed by Night Fury's squad to do the same thing. I will then cast Divine Intervention on our flyers, so we can of course get them down fast. We will be in trouble if we don't take them down quick. Okay, I think this is pretty good plan, we should pull this off. What do you think Swift Gust? Give me an number crunch real quick.

:iconlunaguardplz: :iconsays3plz:  Uhhh...yes your highness, gimme a sec (pulls out abacus)...I'm coming up with thirty-two point three uh, repeating of course, percentage, of victory.

:iconnewlunaisseriousplz: :iconsays3plz: That's a lot better than our last plan with the phoenix eggs. Are we prepared to-

:iconlunaguardmadplz: :iconsays3plz: Okay brothers, Let's do this LEEROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOY WIIIIIIIIINKIIIIIIIIIIIINS! (flies away)

-short pause-

:iconlunaguardplz: :iconsays3plz: ....Oh my Luna, he just flew in.

:iconlunaguard2plz: :iconsays3plz: Save him! (flies off after him)

 :iconlunaguardplz: :iconsays3plz: Let's go, let's go! (flies off)

:iconlunaguardplz: :iconsays3plz: Stick to the plan! 

 :iconlunamadplz: :iconsays3plz: "Quake before the power of the Night!"

-One love wave later-

:iconsarcasticlunaplz: :iconsays3plz: Leroy what is the matter with you!

:iconlunaguardplz: :iconsays3plz: Leeroy, you are stupid as tartartous.

:iconlunaguardplz: :iconsays3plz: Nimrod.

:iconlunaguardplz: :iconsays3plz: Oh my Luna... 

:iconlunaguard2plz::iconsays3plz: ...At least I have hay fries.


Stangely enough there is a Leroy Wingkins in the fandom.…

alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014
0-0 I didn't realize what the joke was until half way through. Interesting. Nicely done. 
yoshiegg64 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014
What fun is an predictable joke?

Thank you! 
yoshiegg64 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014
Things are definelty getting worse. Celestia is down, the interviewers are mortal, Candance is down. Twilight's mom is down, Arcane Spell is down. Oh and Princess Luna and her entire back up were sent flying with an changeling version of Candance/Shining's love shield. Heh wonder where they will end up. I can only imagine her arriving late, and being shocked that all the fighting is already over. Kind of ironic what defeated Chrysalis in the heart world, saved her instead here.
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014
I had to fight to keep that dark little irony in with the dark version of SA/Cadence's love shield. 
ardashir Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014
Just so you know, I posted some stuff from this chapter at CMoF and Shout Outs on the Tropes page, specifically the whole 'I am Evil Chryssy!' bit with the grave.
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014
*hugs* THANK YOU.
ardashir Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014
Toonwatcher Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2014
"And then an asteroid fell out of the sky and squished Queen Chrysalis, because she'd made a huge mistake: she'd crossed the moral event horizon to the point that the universe itself wanted her gone."

I know, but a guy can dream. Anyway, moving on to questions...

"That's not true! See?!" Pinkie Pie pulled a small cloud from nowhere despite not being a Pegasus with the view inside only visible to the Elements and Chrysalis. Pinkie Pie's jaw dropped, when she saw in the cloud a grave etched with a little wing and halo so badly desecrated she could not read the name, and dancing around it was an image the of the changeling queen in a devil costume,
"I am savage wild and free!"
Not bound by moral am me!"

I'm guessing that...Pinkie mind-meld or whatever you want to call supposed to mean that Chrysalis has literally eradicated the goodness from her own soul. A bit abstract, but not so much that I can't puzzle it out.

She even managed to brainwash one of the pan-dimensional interviewers? How does that even happen?

Now I have to worry about quaternary non-characters?
Quaternary? (Gets out dictionary) "Of, relating to, or being the geologic period from the end of the Tertiary to the present." Okay, either there's a second definition that my dictionary doesn't have, or you've got your words mixed up.
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2014
Primary characters, secondary characters, Tertiary characters.

Same why Nightmare Whisper brainwashed them I imagine. 

And such Mary Sue solutions would only attract the wolf to undo it. 

And what Pinkie Pie saw what Chrysalis herself sees in her mind's eyes. 
ItsfromPeople Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014
The part with Hercules Beetle did remind me about an entertaining game I am playing recently.

Hercules Beetle: "But my brother is too reckless to-"

Applejack: "Is he really that bad?"

- somewhere else -

Goliath Beetle: "There's only two tactics a warrior needs to know! Frontal assault and DEATH BY FRONTAL ASSAULT!"

- back here -

Hercules Beetle: "You have no idea."
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014

That's one big Leeroy Jinkens (ironically the original Leeroy's party's plan was poorly put together in the first place, since the enemies they were hoping to distract were actually RESPAWNING enemies, and the protection spell they put on their mages KILLS the paladin and makes the mages unable to cast spells while it's active!). 
ItsfromPeople Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014
By the way the game I was talking about is Bravely Default which is an absolute blast to play. After the halfway point your party begins to travel to alternate versions of the world you know which eventually allows for some pretty insane teamups from the antagonists. Interestingly enough the empire you fight against becomes more and more likeable (even the guy I just quoted becomes more and more hilarious especially with his white mage girlfriend) and then the real villain is revealed as a COMPLETE MONSTER. But since you are a big fan of Puella Magi Madoka Magica, I am pretty sure that you see the big twist coming sooner then most.
ItsfromPeople Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014
I have found a few mistakes:

“Rainbow Dash snarled readying to cold start a Sonic-Rainbow to the changelings face, but got dragged down…” should be “Rainbow Dash snarled readying to cold start a Sonic-Rainboom to the changelings face, but got dragged down…”

=D (Big Grin)ark Underground Rap Instrumental=Why is there a smiley of all things here? It should be removed as soon as possible as it kills the mood of the creepy scene afterwards.


“She couldn't made things WORSE could she?!” should be “She couldn't make things WORSE could she?!”


=P (Razz)ure Odio Live-A-Live= Here is another smiley that doesn’t belong here.

"Pleas be alright." Should be "Please be alright."

alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014
ItsfromPeople Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014
Thanks! Much better!
PsychoDemonFox Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Gaaah...! Queen Chrysalis is REALLY starting to work on my last nerves! She's almost as bad as... well, you know. I can't WAIT to see somepony kick her stupid horsey face in!
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014
She's can't retcon her mistakes out of existence.
She comes close to getting killed more than once here.
She suffers injury here more than once.
She LOSES the beam of war with Celestia here. 
Her using Shining to zap Luna was a last second idea rather than 'all according to plan.'
And Cadence, Blueblood, and the Lyra's group's presence were never a part of her plan. 

That's not to say of course that she isn't a selfish nag who needs to be put down for the sake of everyone else! 
PsychoDemonFox Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ok, fair enough, I did say ALMOST. I still agree she's way too smug for her own good (and disconcertingly knows way more than she should).

Seeing her defeat will be most satisfying. 
MtangaLion Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014
Intense.  I'm looking forward to more.  :)

Looks like they need to free the possessed people to deprive Chrysalis of their love, before they can defeat her.  Something they should realize if they're able to flee, regroup, and plan. 

It always seemed not quite fair... changelings draw strength from love, even false love coming from mind control, but you can't weaken changelings by hating them.
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014
"It always seemed not quite fair... changelings draw strength from love, even false love coming from mind control, but you can't weaken changelings by hating them."

If you had to way to FORCE FEED them hate, you likely would.

"Intense.  I'm looking forward to more.  :) (Smile)"


"Looks like they need to free the possessed people to deprive Chrysalis of their love, before they can defeat her.  Something they should realize if they're able to flee, regroup, and plan.  "

Which is pretty much like Twinkle Shine told Cadence to retreat, they need to compare notes, if they were a species of super telepaths, they could kick changeling butt right now, but sadly, all the confusion is working to the changelings' advantage right now. 
CrazyJabberwock Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014
I knedw things were still going to get worse, can't simply cut off the action now, that said chrysalis seems to have some awareness of her connection to cadence, and the half lights just keep having misfortunes put upon them, what is most jarring is how total the mind control is, I keep waiting for some one to break it with there own will power but I guess that was just setting up dissapointment.
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014
Hopefully I managed to balance here that the ponies ARE NOT finished yet by a long shot here. 

And yes, Chrysalis does seem privy to things she shouldn't know in spades. 

Sweetie Belle, "Why would I want to break free of being free?" 
CrazyJabberwock Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014
Tell me, what has she freed you from? Because all I see is the worst kind of enslavement.
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014
Sweetie Belle, "All my doubts and fears are gone, I never felt so free."
CrazyJabberwock Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014
So, freedom from freedom, the lack of doubts and fears is a sighn that some thing is wrong, very wrong, but why am I bothering, I'm just a shadow, I can't change anything here...
Redmarhuisman Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014
That means you don't think at all like a robot. Cadance knows the memory spell so she could set them free if she had the chance.
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014
"Of course I think, I think Chryssy is great, I think it would be better if everypony just did what Chryssy said instead of getting themselves hurt. And-" Yeah, you get the idea.
jawmax Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014
I may need more Raid.
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014
Chrysalis, "You wouldn't be the first." 
Persona22 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014
"Quake before the power of the Night!" The Canterlot Royal Voice boomed, causing the windows to shudder, not slowing down to negotiate, not slowing down to demand a surrender.

And THAT'S why Luna is badass!
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014
Persona22 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014
For further proof, here's a web comic of Luna taking on a bunch of Daleks.…
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014
Even Chrysalis isn't arrogant enough to take on a pissed off Luna. 
jmcdavid Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014
Stop Pinkie Pie. Just stop. You've already had your 'almost fall into darkness' plot point. 
I thought the Variety Show was non-canon?
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014
It is. She meant 7 Dreams/Nightmares. 
Persona22 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014
I wished I was Luna, because then I could have shot this fallen Flutterpony through the back to protect my ponies without a shred of guilt. But I wasn't gifted with her ruthlessness. And I rationalized that if she did have an army, we needed her to call them off least they try to avenge their fallen leader.

Considering all the backstory that Crhysalis had, and what she IS, I must say I was disappointed when Celestia's defeat came just because she was containing herself.
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014
There are . . . a lot of broken bases on that subject, I shall say no more. 
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